Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Veamon

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Veamon

• Nominated by: Clonehunter^{(Report your W.M.D.)} 02:33, December 2, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: More Dark Forces II mp stuff.

(4 ECs/0 Users/4 Total)

Support

1. Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:32, December 2, 2013 (UTC)
2. 501st dogma^(talk) 21:55, December 5, 2013 (UTC)
3. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 03:41, December 17, 2013 (UTC)
4. Supreme Emperor (talk) 06:17, December 17, 2013 (UTC)

Object

1. • You don't need to say he's a scout twice.
     • I think it's needed in context as too his arsenal (per MotS), but the way it was worded wasn't good. I changed it up now, though if you still think it should be removed then I'll remove the second mention.
   • Given that he's the only current member, there doesn't need to be a category for his species. Ayrehead02 (talk) 21:33, December 2, 2013 (UTC)
     • Alright. Removed the category then. --Clonehunter^{(Report your W.M.D.)} 22:49, December 2, 2013 (UTC)
2. No mention of gender at all??? Is he male, or is it unconfirmed? Either way, you need to add an appropriate category. 501st dogma^(talk) 23:43, December 3, 2013 (UTC)
   • Never seen such a use of question marks from you before. He uses the game's more male body, however, seeing that he appears to be some new alien species, I didn't want to jump to any gender conclusions, because we wouldn't know what a female version of Veamon would look like. As multiplayer profiles, they have basically zero bio minus what the MotS Personalities provides us. Also, I didn't know there was a category for unknown genders. Consider it fixed! --Clonehunter^{(Report your W.M.D.)} 15:15, December 4, 2013 (UTC)

1. SE
   • "Veamon was a scout and a member of a blue-skinned humanoid species that had gray eyes, active during the reign of the New Republic." Can you reword this a bit so he info about the species and eyes come before the scout part?
     • How is that?
   • Can you specify that the pauldron was on his right shoulder? Supreme Emperor (talk) 16:33, December 6, 2013 (UTC)
     • Okay --Clonehunter^{(Report your W.M.D.)} 15:51, December 7, 2013 (UTC)
   • Can anything be said about his pants? Supreme Emperor (talk) 02:18, December 13, 2013 (UTC)
     • I believe that goes under "darkly colored clothing". His jacket received special attention due to the red shape.--Clonehunter^{(Report your W.M.D.)} 22:30, December 14, 2013 (UTC)

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