- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.
Van Serai Hotel
- Nominated by: - Esjs(Talk) 22:35, August 5, 2010 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: My first article nom ever (thought I'd give it a try). By my count, it's at 246 words.
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- This article could be given an infobox and could very easily be given a simple intro, easily taking it to over 250 words and making it GAN-worthy. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 19:32, August 7, 2010 (UTC)
- I take it that a {{Location}} infobox would work. Doesn't the first paragraph work as the intro? I could see putting the remaining paragraphs into a "History" section. If just another sentence were added... - Esjs(Talk) 04:02, August 8, 2010 (UTC)
- I would suggest a {{structure}} infobox. No, you couldn't just make the first paragraph the intro because it contains information that is not in the other paragraphs. Instead, you could write a new small paragraph summarizing briefly what you've said in the current three paragraphs, and make the new one the intro and the rest the main body. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 00:38, August 9, 2010 (UTC)
- I take it that a {{Location}} infobox would work. Doesn't the first paragraph work as the intro? I could see putting the remaining paragraphs into a "History" section. If just another sentence were added... - Esjs(Talk) 04:02, August 8, 2010 (UTC)
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