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Urchiv-ki

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Support

  1. ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 20:20, 9 April 2022 (UTC)
  2. —spookywillowwtalk 19:33, 10 April 2022 (UTC)
  3. AmazinglyCool CIS roundel (talk) 21:57, 10 April 2022 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 23:58, 15 April 2022 (UTC)
  5. ECvote Commander Code-8 Hello There! 02:20, 21 April 2022 (UTC)

Object

CC-8
  • The information about Thrawn's core name is all a dependent clause that's not connected to the information that follows it, so it needs a comma at the end. Same goes for Tower Dimension, though that needs them at the start too Commander Code-8 Hello There! 12:59, 13 April 2022 (UTC)
    • Fixed. Thank you.— Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 13:27, 13 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Since it's in the category for Unknown Systems species that should be mentioned in the body Commander Code-8 Hello There! 00:04, 14 April 2022 (UTC)
    • Taken care of.— Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 09:23, 14 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Last thing, The Ascendancy Trilogy needs some variety of italics. Unless there's something different used in the books themselves, Every SW.com article linked on our wiki page uses a different variation so pick whichever one you like. Also calling Timothy Zahn an author is redundant Commander Code-8 Hello There! 11:17, 17 April 2022 (UTC)
    • I am not sure that I understand the "variety of italics" bit, but I added italics if that is what you meant.— Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 16:20, 17 April 2022 (UTC)
      • Done.— Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 13:27, 18 April 2022 (UTC)
VergenceScatter
  • As on Tower Dimesnion, the treaty with the Chiss should get a mention. VergenceScatter (talk) 17:19, 13 April 2022 (UTC)
    • Fixed both, thank you.— Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 18:18, 13 April 2022 (UTC)
Manoof
  • Would it be better to say their government was under the control of Yiv? I also think its better to move this until after you mention the Tower Dimension. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:13, 15 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Context for the treaty (ie what did it do, we at least know it allowed chiss visitation right?) and that it was with the Chiss ascendancy rather than the species Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:13, 15 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Context for Thrawn, specifically that he was Chiss. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:13, 15 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Did Thrawn single-handedly defeat Yiv or was it Chiss forces under Ar'alani's command? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:13, 15 April 2022 (UTC)
    • All done.— Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 14:29, 15 April 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 02:20, 21 April 2022 (UTC)