- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Comprehensive article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.
Unidentified warehouse (Nakadia)
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Ben
- It would be better to describe Operation Ringbreaker by its true purpose, attacking numerous soft targets going up to Kuat Drive Yards.
- Nakadia needs context. If BTC doesn't specify it as a planet there will be other sources to say so.
- You only need to put warehouse in bold as it's a conjectural article.
- You need to add the audio book to the appearances.
- You should specify that Namir wasn't an alien.
- "One of the targets outlined was Nakadia, which produced chemical weapons for the Imperial war effort." You talk about Nakadia as if it's a separate location. It would be better to present Nakadia and its purposes in the first sentence of the history and Operation Ringbreaker in the next one when specifying Nakadia was among the targets.
- You should specify that the bioweapons came from Coyerti.
- You should also expand the intro to include the use of the weapons against the Sixty-First and the subsequent destruction of the warehouse. Braha'tok enthusiast (Hello there) 08:16, May 1, 2020 (UTC)
Comments
- The word count is close to 250. But fear not, if the article is too big for a CAN, at least it will be an easier GAN after you address the objections here. Braha'tok enthusiast (Hello there) 08:16, May 1, 2020 (UTC)
- Archiving per user request (via immediate GAN nomination). Tommy
Macaroni 09:16, May 1, 2020 (UTC)