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Unidentified smuggler (Level 2142)
- Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:25, January 11, 2015 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: First nomination found here.
(4 ECs/1 Users/5 Total)
Support
I do loath that infobox.... 501st dogma(talk) 22:30, January 13, 2015 (UTC)- ^Yep. Corellian Premier
The Force will be with you always 00:56, January 14, 2015 (UTC) - Manoof (talk) 02:30, January 28, 2015 (UTC)
Supreme Emperor (talk) 05:40, February 12, 2015 (UTC)- Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 23:45, February 21, 2015 (UTC)
Object
"promised her and her younger brother" Please reword this. It sounds like the her is referring to the smuggler.- Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:32, January 28, 2015 (UTC)
Please specify that Alderaan was destroyed by the Empire.Supreme Emperor (talk) 05:28, January 28, 2015 (UTC)- Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:32, January 28, 2015 (UTC)
"the Alderaanian family of Anandra Milon " Please reword. It sounds like the family name is Anandra Milon.Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:50, February 6, 2015 (UTC)- Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:30, February 6, 2015 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi
The last two sentences in the article don't really focus on the smuggler and are written more from the Milons perspective. I know it is probably not easy, but try and write them to focus more on what the smuggler did, rather than what the Milons did.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 15:55, February 16, 2015 (UTC)
- Done, I think? Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:13, February 16, 2015 (UTC)
Does the source state that he was operating on Coruscant or was the instance in question the only evidence given in the story? Unless the source says otherwise, he could have been making a special trip to Coruscant as a favor to the Milons' friend.- Removed operated. Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:01, February 20, 2015 (UTC)
Does the story say who arranged the meeting?- No. Ayrehead02 (talk) 03:02, February 17, 2015 (UTC)
Are there any quotes in the story related to the character?--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 18:07, February 16, 2015 (UTC)
- Added a quote which indirectly involves the smuggler. Ayrehead02 (talk) 03:02, February 17, 2015 (UTC)
Does the story state that the smuggler left Coruscant without them or do they just show up late and the smuggler isn't there? If nothing is said about him leaving, I do not think you can assume that he left successfully. If it merely states that the Milons think he left without them, then you could state that they thought he left before they got there.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 05:46, February 17, 2015 (UTC)
- It says that the smuggler left. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:49, February 17, 2015 (UTC)