Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified reserve fleet

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Unidentified reserve fleet

• Nominated by: Vitus Infinitus^Talk 22:25, March 16, 2020 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(4 ECs/0 Users/4 Total)

Support

1. Fan26 (Talk) 22:21, April 2, 2020 (UTC)
2. Zed42 (talk) 05:48, April 4, 2020 (UTC)
3. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 13:59, April 5, 2020 (UTC)
4. —spookywilloww^talk 02:08, April 6, 2020 (UTC)

Object

Editor

• You need to make the b in Battle for Anaxes lower case--Editoronthewiki (talk) 04:54, March 17, 2020 (UTC)
  • Done--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 05:00, March 17, 2020 (UTC)
• I don’t think you can cite everything in the behind the scenes to the episode--Editoronthewiki (talk) 14:23, March 17, 2020 (UTC)
  • Fixed--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 14:47, March 17, 2020 (UTC)

Fan

• Refs two and three, and the information they cite, are extreme extrapolation bordering on speculation. I don't think we can say that just because a Core Worlds planet's loss would compromise the fleet, the fleet itself must be located within the Core Worlds, nor can it be said that because the reserve fleet is identified as a "fleet", as in the general maritime term for a large unit of ships, that it is one of these "six principle fleets" attached to a sector army. Please remove them if there is not better justification for that information. Fan26 (Talk) 14:32, March 17, 2020 (UTC)
  • Removed--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 14:46, March 17, 2020 (UTC)
  • Reworded to better reflect information from Rise of the Separatists--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 17:50, March 17, 2020 (UTC)
    • Removed again based on concerns here and on the trash compactor nomination page.--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 00:41, March 19, 2020 (UTC)
• Instead of a brief summary of the Battle of Anaxes, I think you can just say that during the battle Windu talked about how losing the planet could compromise the fleet. Fan26 (Talk) 14:58, March 17, 2020 (UTC)
  • How is it now?--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 17:52, March 17, 2020 (UTC)
• The entire BtS is currently one big run-on, please fix this. Fan26 (Talk) 19:15, April 2, 2020 (UTC)
  • Fixed--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 21:35, April 2, 2020 (UTC)

Zed

• "During the Clone Wars between the Galactic Republic and the Separatist Alliance, a reserve fleet was part of the Republic Navy by the time of the battle for Anaxes." Could you combine the two pieces of context regarding the time of the fleet's operation (during Clone Wars and before Anaxes) rather than have them separated by the mention of the fleet?
  • Fixed--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 00:52, April 3, 2020 (UTC)
• The Layout Guide requires television episodes to provide a full date of release in the BTS. Zed42 (talk) 00:07, April 3, 2020 (UTC)
  • Done--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 00:52, April 3, 2020 (UTC)
    • As far as I know, the release date can't be sourced to the episode itself. Zed42 (talk) 00:27, April 4, 2020 (UTC)
      • Fixed--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 02:21, April 4, 2020 (UTC)
• Could you also give a date for the Battle of Anaxes?
  • Added--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 02:21, April 4, 2020 (UTC)
• Anaxes itself needs linking and context. Zed42 (talk) 00:27, April 4, 2020 (UTC)
  • Done--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 02:21, April 4, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

• The article has been trash compacted, sorry Vitus. Fan26 (Talk) 15:26, March 17, 2020 (UTC)
• I want to make a note that the article was cleared from being trash compacted after no consensus.--Vitus Infinitus^Talk 02:14, April 2, 2020 (UTC)
• Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 02:08, April 6, 2020 (UTC)