Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified patient (Argo-6)

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Unidentified patient (Argo-6)

• Nominated by: Jade Moonstroller (talk) 03:52, 27 March 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Get ready for my next line of CANs! Now, I'm starting to pull from Monsters and Aliens from George Lucas.
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(3 ECs/3 Users/6 Total)

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Support

1. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 16:59, 4 April 2022 (UTC)
2. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 07:15, 9 April 2022 (UTC)
3. — Samonic 09:25, 9 April 2022 (UTC)
4. VergenceScatter (talk) 18:27, 10 April 2022 (UTC)
5. ThrawnChiss7 (talk) 21:24, 21 April 2022 (UTC)
6. OOM 224 06:44, 23 April 2022 (UTC)

Object

Macaroni

• To quote Ecks, all of the sentences in the body are what I'd call "boring." They have just one main clause and one subject each. Try to make it read a little less choppy and introduce some sentence-style variation.
  • I modified it, and I hope that's good. Jade Moonstroller (talk) 04:59, 30 March 2022 (UTC)
• Saying "incredible" certainly violates WP:NPOV. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 01:49, 30 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Noted. Jade Moonstroller (talk) 04:59, 30 March 2022 (UTC)

Verge

• Please update the quote so that it includes a reference. VergenceScatter (talk) 16:53, 3 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Does the [src] after the quote not qualify? Jade Moonstroller (talk) 02:52, 4 April 2022 (UTC)
    • Per a recent CT, quotes are now required to use regular references instead of the old source field. VergenceScatter (talk) 04:05, 4 April 2022 (UTC)

OOM

• The lead quote indicates that the individual made comments in The Galactic Gossip, but the article prose itself doesn't really say so. Maybe you can make that clearer?
  • Donezo. Jade Moonstroller (talk) 06:30, 23 April 2022 (UTC)
• Context for The Galactic Gossip would be nice too OOM 224 12:23, 9 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Sure thing, let me look into this. Jade Moonstroller (talk) 16:07, 16 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Tackled. Jade Moonstroller (talk) 06:30, 23 April 2022 (UTC)
    • Awesome OOM 224 06:44, 23 April 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 06:45, 23 April 2022 (UTC)