Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified minor Chiss family

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Unidentified minor Chiss family

  • Nominated by: Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 16:35, 16 August 2022 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Sadly Thrass's FAN didn't pass.
  • WookieeProject (optional): Chiss, Novels

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

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Support

  1. BloodOfIrizi Sabine Starbird (talk) 22:25, 26 August 2022 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:29, 27 August 2022 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 19:02, 28 August 2022 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Commander Code-8 Hello There! 11:01, 30 August 2022 (UTC)

Object

CC-8
  • There's quite a few terms, (rematch, ranking distant, cousin) that need context so that the article isn't confusing for those who haven't read the book. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 06:00, 22 August 2022 (UTC)
    • I reviewed Thrass' section and it seems he's not a cousin. The other terms now have context or have been changed with similar terms. Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 08:04, 22 August 2022 (UTC)
Braha
  • Since Thrass is technically not part of this family. There's no need to mention his death. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 11:39, 25 August 2022 (UTC)
    • Fair enough. Removed. Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 12:06, 25 August 2022 (UTC)
Unidentified shazil
  • thrass came into the Mitth as a cousin
  • and Thrass became one too once he was born. — can you reword this? it can be shrunken down, maybe something like as did Thrass after his birth'
  • remove the link to nation, thats abt to be TC'd
  • mention that Thooraki offered Thrass' mother to rematch with the Mitth BloodOfIrizi Sabine Starbird (talk) 17:44, 26 August 2022 (UTC)
  • i think it would be better to introduce him as "Chiss Syndic Thrass" in the first sentence
    • I missed that. Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 19:43, 26 August 2022 (UTC)
  • the assassin link is unnecessary
    • Not really. The assassination attempt is linked previously, and there's no reason not to link "assassin." Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 19:43, 26 August 2022 (UTC)
  • dating (if possible), perhaps a "by (insert year)" for the assasination attempt BloodOfIrizi Sabine Starbird (talk) 19:37, 26 August 2022 (UTC)
    • I would have included dating if there was. Samonic ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol 19:43, 26 August 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 11:01, 30 August 2022 (UTC)