Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified minelayer

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Unidentified minelayer

(1 ECs/3 Users/4 Total)

Support

  1. "What happens when you get to 999?" "Nothing. You just suck!" NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 17:08, October 18, 2010 (UTC)
  2. ~ SavageBob 21:21, October 23, 2010 (UTC)
  3. Menkooroo 00:05, October 25, 2010 (UTC)
  4. ECvote 1358 (Talk) 10:22, October 27, 2010 (UTC)

Object

  1. I suggest you merge the intro and the history. There's no point of having them both in a super short article like this. 1358 (Talk) 11:45, September 27, 2010 (UTC)
  2. "It's never the first one!"
    • Your sentences are very choppy.
    • I know CAs are lax about following the layout guide, but you could definitely write a Characteristics section for this. That also means you'd have to write a brief History if not a Role section as well. See here.
    • Your BTS could also use more information, i.e., which level they appeared in and who made the game.NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 01:54, October 5, 2010 (UTC)
      • How does the article look now? Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 02:28, October 5, 2010 (UTC)
        • First, the Intro and History are too similar. You must reword the sentences and, ideally, have a significant difference in length (shorten the intro).
        • Give the title of the level in the Bts.
        • JFFR, when someone asks for who made the game, they mean the developers (in this case Factor 5), not LucasArts.
        • The Characteristics section should include a physical description. I still suggest a Role section, but due to the History section detailing what would be in it, I will not push for one. NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 03:07, October 5, 2010 (UTC)
    • Are they actually called "minelayers" in the game? If not they cannot be referred to as such in the article. It should instead read "ship" or some equivalent. It can also say they were used as minelayers if that is the case. NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 03:07, October 5, 2010 (UTC)
    • A mention of Sykes being in the stolen gunboat, concealing his identity from the minelayers, should be added. NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 03:07, October 5, 2010 (UTC)
    • Added. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 21:55, October 5, 2010 (UTC)
    • Sorry, I overestimated my free time, so I fixed certain things myself. It'll take time for me to get back to you on the other things as well. NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 22:12, October 13, 2010 (UTC)
    • That they are affiliated with the TF Droid Army is currently only in the infobox. NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 22:12, October 13, 2010 (UTC)
  3. Whoops
    • The article uses both "Andrevea River" and "The Andrevea River". Pick one and stay consistent, baby!
    • As a note, the Andrevea River article doesn't seem to be consistent on that, either. Even though it's already passed its nomination, could you consistitize that one, too? Menkooroo 04:24, October 24, 2010 (UTC)

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