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Unidentified man (Five Points Station)

  • Nominated by: YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol (talk) 01:39, 26 January 2022 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
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(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 19:14, 9 February 2022 (UTC)
  2. Jade Moonstroller (talk) 06:48, 10 February 2022 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Don't forget to refer to characters by their last names. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 22:45, 17 February 2022 (UTC)
  4. ECvoteManoof (he/him/his) (talk) 02:11, 19 February 2022 (UTC)
  5. ECvote Fan26 (Talk) 03:02, 19 February 2022 (UTC)

Object

Luca
  • The sectioning looks kind of weird, especially the one-sentence paragraph.
  • Numbers below 50 should be spelled out.
  • A few links are missing in the ref note and the body.
  • I'd like to see some context for Jyn Erso upon her first mention.
    • At the time, she was a fugitive slicer, so that's what I put. She was not yet a member of the Rebel Alliance. (If you want, I could add that she was a former Partisan.) -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol (talk) 19:40, 26 January 2022 (UTC)
  • Is there no relevant quote? LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 16:20, 26 January 2022 (UTC)
  • The title should probably be at Unidentified human male (Five Points Station), and this disambiguation page should be linked.
    • I linked the disambiguation page. -- 00:51, 1 February 2022 (UTC)
    • The book calls him a "man". I'm following the precedent of Unidentified girl. If you still think the page should be moved, I will
  • I'd like to see a date for the events described.
    • Added. -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol (talk) 00:51, 1 February 2022 (UTC)
      • I'm not sure about why we need two refs for the dates. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 15:20, 7 February 2022 (UTC)
  • Please take note of my copy-edit. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 07:55, 30 January 2022 (UTC)
  • Context for "Kath" would be nice if available. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 15:13, 7 February 2022 (UTC)
    • Added. -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) linkWP:Chiss (talk) 17:30, 7 February 2022 (UTC)
      • I've removed this since we don't usually contextualize species--it would sound weird to say "Chewbacca, a Wookiee, which was a sentient species." JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 22:47, 17 February 2022 (UTC)

Comments

  • Is (Five Points Station) the in-universe name, or should it just be (Five Points)? Loqiical (talk) 00:25, 13 February 2022 (UTC)
  • I added a category, should we have a subcategory for Five Points residents? I'm not familiar with the source but I think Jyn would also fit in right? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:18, 13 February 2022 (UTC)
    • Yes, good idea. And Jyn lived there for at least 3 years, so certainly. — YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) linkWP:Chiss (talk) 18:06, 13 February 2022 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 03:02, 19 February 2022 (UTC)