Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified human female (Lesser Space)

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Unidentified human female (Lesser Space)

• Nominated by: YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) (talk) 23:32, 15 January 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Lorana Jinzler
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:Novels and WP:Chiss

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Support

1. Good job as always. *Samonic (talk) 14:22, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
2. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 12:27, 24 January 2022 (UTC)
3. Nice! LucaRoR ^(Talk) 19:17, 24 January 2022 (UTC)
4. Fan26 (Talk) 06:10, 29 January 2022 (UTC)
5. OOM 224 08:59, 30 January 2022 (UTC)

Object

Samonic

• I believe the article should link Gender and human in the first mention. Both should be linked in the following sentence: "A human female from..." *Samonic (talk) 12:10, 12 January 2022 (UTC) 12:04, 16 January 2022 (UTC)
  • Normally yes, but precedent is not to do so in the very specific case of conjecturally-titled articles where those words are bolded. — YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) (talk) 18:48, 16 January 2022 (UTC)
    • I see. Thanks. —Unsigned comment by Samonic (talk • contribs)

Braha

• I don't really dig the way the death is introduced before the leadup to the deaths. I think that should be put at the end.
  • Better now? -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) (talk) 03:56, 24 January 2022 (UTC)
• Reading Thrass's death section, it says his death was only presumed. It also gives a little more context into what caused the starship's end:
  • Are you able to clear up to me whether the death definitely happened?
  • I think you should add some more context per my last part. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 15:19, 16 January 2022 (UTC)

Luca

• The death date is infobox exclusive.
  • Better? -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) (talk) 18:55, 24 January 2022 (UTC)
• The events should be described in chronological order. Therefore, the discussion that they had before dying should be put before their death.
  • I rephrased it, but their impending death was relevant to their conversation because they knew they were about to die. -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) (talk) 18:55, 24 January 2022 (UTC)
• Please, make sure to be ok with this copy-edit. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 15:29, 24 January 2022 (UTC)
  • okay :) -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) (talk) 18:55, 24 January 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 08:59, 30 January 2022 (UTC)