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Unidentified hauler (Cair San Tekka)

  • Nominated by: —spookywillowwtalk 04:53, 22 June 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 23:56, 7 July 2024 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 163 words (0 introduction, 132 body, 31 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 164 words (0 introduction, 133 body, 31 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:NOVELSWP:THR

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Support

  1. ECvote Lewisr (talk) 20:47, 22 June 2024 (UTC)
  2. Sanathestarr (talk) 20:43, 2 July 2024 (UTC)
  3. CometSmudge (talk) 03:26, 7 July 2024 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Fan26 (Talk) 18:48, 7 July 2024 (UTC)
  5. Booply (talk) 22:02, 7 July 2024 (UTC)

Object

Comet
  • It sounds a bit odd to say both that he hid it and that he had someone else hide it for him, could you tweak that sentence a bit?
    • I agree it sounds odd, and this has come up amongst board members too, but the text does both say (upon the hauler's introduction and the pages before he swaps ships) that it's both a shuttle he hid and one that he bribed others to hide for him. Both are technically possible (could've hid it and then had them re-hide it when Nihil presence got worse in the sector) and breaking up the sentence into two would make them unnecessarily short, so I disagree with doing that.—spookywillowwtalk 03:18, 7 July 2024 (UTC)
  • Since he hid the hauler before the events of the novel, I think the date note needs to be changed CometSmudge (talk)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 23:54, 7 July 2024 (UTC)