Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified forest

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Unidentified forest

• Nominated by: LucaRoR ^(Talk) 15:28, 12 October 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:NOVELS

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Support

1. YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) (talk) 18:22, 14 October 2021 (UTC)
2. Dentface (talk) 17:10, 17 October 2021 (UTC)
3. Immi Thrax (she/her) (talk) 10:03, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
4. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 23:22, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
5. OOM 224 17:55, 8 November 2021 (UTC)

Object

• I would change "his father, Gora" to something like "his father Gora, count of Serenno". -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) (talk) 20:42, 13 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Added, thanks. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 05:36, 14 October 2021 (UTC)

CC-8

• Can the details of Dooku's finding be added? Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 08:11, 23 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Yep, added, thanks! LucaRoR ^(Talk) 09:39, 23 October 2021 (UTC)
• I think it would be good to elaborate what exactly Dooku could have been much more than. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 09:40, 29 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Added. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 12:32, 29 October 2021 (UTC)

Immi Thrax

• There are some more details in the story are relevant to include. Dooku learned about his abandonment in that forest from Yoda, and the seeker came to that forest because Gora had sent a message to the Council asking them to take Dooku. Immi Thrax (she/her) (talk) 23:31, 23 October 2021 (UTC)
• There's a bit more location information in the story than in the article. The story says that Dooku was "left outside [Gora's] castle's walls." Immi Thrax (she/her) (talk) 23:31, 23 October 2021 (UTC)
• The page quote reflects that Dooku started to say something about what would've happened in that forest if the seeker hadn't found him, and further (unquoted) lines show further reflection on how the incident changed the course of his life. Please incorporate that. Immi Thrax (she/her) (talk) 23:31, 23 October 2021 (UTC)
  • All fixed, thanks! LucaRoR ^(Talk) 07:11, 24 October 2021 (UTC)
    • For the last fix, it's unclear--"could have been much more" than what? Immi Thrax (she/her) (talk) 10:37, 29 October 2021 (UTC)
      • Better? LucaRoR ^(Talk) 12:32, 29 October 2021 (UTC)
        • Better! One more thing to clear up: what is the "it" they were laughing about (Dooku's ego). Immi Thrax (she/her) (talk) 22:55, 29 October 2021 (UTC)
          • Fixed, thanks. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 09:45, 30 October 2021 (UTC)

OOM

• Not sure what "Gora's walls" means. Please specify
• Could use some more links to things like time, reproduction, parent etc.
• Shouldn't "Jedi Council" here link to Jedi High Council?
  • All fixed. Regarding your objection below, I've asked a few people if they could check it for me since I do not own the new edition of the book. I will leave a note once checked. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 15:25, 2 November 2021 (UTC)
• Can the Star Wars: Absolutely Everything You Need to Know info be sourced to the new edition? If so, then that should be done since it's always best to use the most recent and accessible source. OOM 224 21:24, 1 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Checked and updated, I'll update all the others CAs of mine when I get the chance. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 09:32, 7 November 2021 (UTC)
• Is there an article for Gora's castle? And if not, is it worth creating one? OOM 224 21:33, 2 November 2021 (UTC)
  • I thought about that too, but the castle is only mentioned once in the book, and it doesn't have a relevant role in the plot. Gora owns a palace that appears later in the book, but I think it would be speculative to consider it the same. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 08:34, 3 November 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 17:55, 8 November 2021 (UTC)