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Unidentified female soldier (Sai tok)

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

Support

  1. ECvote 501st dogma(talk) 14:25, June 11, 2014 (UTC)
  2. Clone Commander Lee Talk 14:46, June 11, 2014 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:17, June 14, 2014 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Supreme Emperor (talk) 15:32, June 16, 2014 (UTC)

Object

Lee's charge
  • Is there a reason why the Imperial Military is not mentioned?
    • It's never directly mentioned that she is a part of the Military, however I can add it if you wish.
      • So, the soldier above is mentioned as a part of a military and this one is not? Clone Commander Lee Talk 12:39, June 4, 2014 (UTC)
        • That may be speculation on my part as the novel identifies her as a soldier. I can remove that bit from that article if needed.
          • If it is said that she is an Imperial soldier, you should keep it. If not, she could be a hired gun, security force or whatever. Clone Commander Lee Talk 13:30, June 5, 2014 (UTC)
            • The novel just says soldier so I removed the Imperial Army affiliation from the previous article. Should I also remove the Sith Empire affiliation? DarthRevan1173 Revan Headshot (Long live Lord Revan) 06:53, June 6, 2014 (UTC)
  • Commas, also most of this is identical with the article above. Please vary your word choice.
    • Removed a few/add some commas, and re-worded the article.
  • Something is wrong in the BtS. Clone Commander Lee Talk 10:05, June 3, 2014 (UTC)
  • Same date objection. Clone Commander Lee Talk 12:39, June 4, 2014 (UTC)
    • Changed to The Essential Reader's Companion since it states (IMO) that part two takes place in 3950 and she is in part two of the novel. Is that better? DarthRevan1173 Revan Headshot (Long live Lord Revan) 00:55, June 5, 2014 (UTC)
  • See above. Clone Commander Lee Talk 10:33, June 6, 2014 (UTC)
  • Refs go after the comma. Clone Commander Lee Talk 11:20, June 10, 2014 (UTC)
501st
  • "...T3 used his flamethrower to set the male ablaze." The male? Who are we talking about here?
    • It's unknown since the novel just say's male soldier and doesn't specify on if it's Murtog or the unidentified soldier. The novel also doesn't specify which male soldier Surik stab's earlier in the battle.
  • You have the strike team consisting of three handpicked troopers, but four die during the skirmish. Is Murtog part of the force? If so, that needs to be clarified. 501st dogma(talk) 15:41, June 8, 2014 (UTC)
Ayrehead
  • When mentioning the other female solider's death could you say the other female solider to make it clear it isn't the subject of the article.Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:10, June 12, 2014 (UTC)
    • Done.
  • You say she was picked with two other soliders but then list the deaths of three others? Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:10, June 12, 2014 (UTC)
    • It's 4 including Murtog and all four are listed.
      • Could you clarify which of the male soldiers he is during the fight? Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:02, June 13, 2014 (UTC)
        • Not without speculating. The novel doesn't identify how he or the other male dies, it just says they're part of the same team. DarthRevan1173 Revan Headshot (Long live Lord Revan) 01:08, June 14, 2014 (UTC)
  • I think you need an other between two soldiers since she is also a solider. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:10, June 12, 2014 (UTC)

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