Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified female Jedi Master (meditation)

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Unidentified female Jedi Master (meditation)

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:39, July 9, 2013 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Commander Code-8 You lost the game! 06:51, August 2, 2013 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 13:26, August 2, 2013 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Winterz (talk) 03:28, August 13, 2013 (UTC)
  5. Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:30, August 14, 2013 (UTC)

Object

  1. CC-8'
    • I'm not a fan of the use of "this" in the into. "A" would probably be better.
      • Changed.
    • Sectioning off isn't really necessary here, the article isn't even that far over 100 words, and both sections seem to basically say the same thing, so a lot of words could be cut back anyway
      • Removed Bio since it is the same.
    • Perhaps say that she was in the Jedi Order before order 66, just as a small thing to show that she definitely wasn't in the NJO
      • Removed mention the order she was a part of since the novel doesn't identify which Jedi Order she is a part of.
    • The hideps/hidecs, whatever in the infobox shouldn't be there when they have filled in fields underneath them. Commander Code-8 You lost the game! 07:45, July 8, 2013 (UTC)
      • Fixed.
    • Perhaps it should say a picture of her meditating was taken/made whatever before it says Luke saw it.
      • Mentioned.
    • Since the category of Post-Ruusan is used maybe put that in the article somewhere.
      • Removed as the novel doesn't confirm if she was part of the Pre or Post Ruusan Jedi.
    • Article for the picture
      • Linked and created.
    • Legacy era should be removed since she could have been dead at that point. Commander Code-8 You lost the game! 11:07, July 17, 2013 (UTC)
    • Last one, find a different word to bold at the start. Commander Code-8 You lost the game! 22:25, July 29, 2013 (UTC)
  1. Ayrehead
    • Actually to slightly contradict CC-8, given that the Jedi enclave on Corellia was built after the Yuzhan Vong War I'm not sure we can assume she was in the Jedi Order at all as it's more like she's in the New Jedi Order. To be safe you should probably just say she was a Jedi and not mention either order. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:44, July 8, 2013 (UTC)
      • Removed mention the order she was a part of since the novel doesn't identify which Jedi Order she is a part of. DarthRevan1173 Revan Headshot (Long live Lord Revan) 00:10, July 9, 2013 (UTC)
  1. Winterz
  1. SE

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