- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Unidentified female (Anchorhead)
- Nominated by: Darth Morrt 15:21, October 22, 2010 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)
Support
- More ANH novel goodness! Menkooroo 22:23, October 31, 2010 (UTC)
- You kids, get off my lawn! ~ SavageBob 23:33, October 31, 2010 (UTC)
Classic! --Eyrezer 09:49, November 1, 2010 (UTC)- Cavalier One
(Squadron channel) 10:39, November 3, 2010 (UTC)
Object
How do you feel about jettisoning the intro? The article is so short that an additional summary of it isn't really needed. Most CA's don't have 'em 'cause they don't need 'em.Menkooroo 07:17, October 26, 2010 (UTC)- Cut. Darth Morrt 08:17, October 26, 2010 (UTC)
Some minor grammar issues throughout --- I'm looking for "at" top speed, "ran" instead of "run", an apostropher in "Skywalkers" --- I could sofixit, but I'm hoping you can give the entire article a cleanup and copy-edit.- The bts mention of her appearance in the revised fourth draft should be sourced to where the revised fourth draft is available online (it's not self-sourcing since we have no article on it).
Can you give some context on Luke Skywalker? Even something as simple as farmboy. Menkooroo 01:58, October 27, 2010 (UTC)- I fixed all above.
- Prepare to be savaged...
Just one thing: Can you stub sun shawl? Seems like something we should have an article for. ~ SavageBob 17:22, October 31, 2010 (UTC)- Page created. Thanks for the copy-edit. Just one thing, I have no proof that the woman's scene was ever filmed. Can the article say that the scene was cut? Maybe it was dropped before the filming. (Or maybe I misunderstand the meaning of 'cut' :D ) Darth Morrt 19:29, October 31, 2010 (UTC)
- Well, it's hard (if not impossible) to prove a negative, so I've tried to make it a bit more ambiguous whether the "cut" was from the script or the film itself. ~ SavageBob 23:33, October 31, 2010 (UTC)
- Page created. Thanks for the copy-edit. Just one thing, I have no proof that the woman's scene was ever filmed. Can the article say that the scene was cut? Maybe it was dropped before the filming. (Or maybe I misunderstand the meaning of 'cut' :D ) Darth Morrt 19:29, October 31, 2010 (UTC)
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