Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified droid (chop shop)

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Unidentified droid (chop shop)

• Nominated by: —Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 02:41, April 29, 2012 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:First nom for Wookieepedia's Fourth Barn-Burner.

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)

Support

1. Bet it feels good to be done with the chop shop noms. Corellian Premier^{All along the watchtower} 03:34, April 29, 2012 (UTC)
2. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 01:18, April 30, 2012 (UTC)
3. <Omicron^{(Leave a message at the BEEP!)} 20:44, April 30, 2012 (UTC)
4. ~Savage 18:18, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Object

1. Just one thing: No height in the bio? Corellian Premier^{All along the watchtower} 02:58, April 29, 2012 (UTC)
   • I knew I forgot something. Thanks for the review.—Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 03:02, April 29, 2012 (UTC)
2. I think you should reword the article so it doesn't say "class three CZ-series communications/business droid", because this makes it sound like there are multiple classes of the droid rather than that it was a class three droid.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 16:31, April 29, 2012 (UTC)
   • Switched. Thanks for the review.—Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 23:50, April 29, 2012 (UTC)
3. Savaged…
   • The Herglic doesn't seem to just be looking on; he or she is holding the body of the droid. Can you mention that the head was off with the Duro while the Herglic held the rest of the droid? ~Savage 14:41, May 2, 2012 (UTC)
     • Done. Thanks for the review.—Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 15:05, May 2, 2012 (UTC)
       • Just thought I'd say that the Verpine is holding one of the droid's arms.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 15:29, May 2, 2012 (UTC)
         • Good catch. See what you think.—Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 18:03, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

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