- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.
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Unidentified clone trooper 2 (17's squad)
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Context for Geonosis.- Done
You should link the other trooper earlier.- Not sure what you mean, the other trooper is linked twice (intro and body)
- I would move the article to "Unidentified clone trooper 2 (17's squad)". Otherwise it sound like 17 had more then one squad.
- Not sure how to move it. And just to clarify, squad is a loose term, as we see the four troopers together but don't know if they were a squad or just survivors who banded together. I changed the wording to make it a bit clearer, is that right?
- See above.
- Not sure how to move it. And just to clarify, squad is a loose term, as we see the four troopers together but don't know if they were a squad or just survivors who banded together. I changed the wording to make it a bit clearer, is that right?
Place of death needs to be added to the infobox, same for the birthplace.- Added place of death, but doesn't homeworld indicate place of birth?
- Not necessarily, it could be adopted.
- Added
- Not necessarily, it could be adopted.
- Added place of death, but doesn't homeworld indicate place of birth?
Birthdate needs to be mentioned in the bio.- Done
You should mention at least once that they were fighting the CIS.- Already mentioned twice, as Confederacy of Independent Systems.
- Could you clarify it were CIS battle droids they fought against?
- Done
- Could you clarify it were CIS battle droids they fought against?
- Already mentioned twice, as Confederacy of Independent Systems.
- "3/3"? There a lot more of them. At least four on the Prosecutor! Bring it on! Clone Commander Lee Talk 09:56, April 3, 2014 (UTC)
- 3/3 of that round of noms lol Manoof (talk) 06:46, April 5, 2014 (UTC)
- Good to hear! Clone Commander Lee Talk 12:03, April 5, 2014 (UTC)
- 3/3 of that round of noms lol Manoof (talk) 06:46, April 5, 2014 (UTC)
I think the stuff about the bacta tank is unnecessary in the intro.- Removed
1st tag missing.- Added
Reference for 22 BBY.- Added
- Please take a look at my changes. Clone Commander Lee Talk 12:03, April 5, 2014 (UTC)
- I noticed, thanks!
- 252 words now. I'll count again once you addressed these objections. Clone Commander Lee Talk 12:04, April 5, 2014 (UTC)
Please reload the infobox.Clone Commander Lee Talk 00:04, April 6, 2014 (UTC)- 256 words now. I suggest that I archive this nomination and continue the review on the GAN page. Plus I'm going to move the article. Clone Commander Lee Talk 00:47, April 6, 2014 (UTC)