Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified clone trooper 1 (17's squad)

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Unidentified clone trooper 1 (17's squad)

  • Nominated by: Manoof (talk) 01:34, April 3, 2014 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:2/3

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Lee
  • Context for Geonosis.
    • Done
  • You should link the other trooper earlier.
    • As other trooper?
      • Yes.
        • Done
  • I would move the article to "Unidentified clone trooper 1 (17's squad)". Otherwise it sound like 17 had more then one squad.
    • Again, not sure.
      • Well, then consult some other users on their POV.
        • I'll have a look and reply once it's done. Do i need to move the nomination page as well?
          • If it is too large for CAN, you don't need to care about that. :P Clone Commander Lee Talk
            • Moved, can you just check it's ok. The CAnom notice at the top is broken of course, not sure what i need to do now. Manoof (talk) 00:44, April 6, 2014 (UTC)
  • Place of death needs to be added to the infobox.
    • He's a survivor, we don't see him die (unless you kill him yourself)
      • Ah yes. Then please add his Place of birth. That's what I meant.
        • Fixed
  • Birthdate needs to be mentioned in the bio.
    • Done
  • You should mention at least once that they were fighting the CIS.
    • Already mentioned Manoof (talk) 07:27, April 5, 2014 (UTC)
      • Not in the intro.
        • Added
  • Clone Commander Lee Talk 09:51, April 3, 2014 (UTC)
  • You don't need to source the info.
    • Refs removed
  • You'll need a reference for the 22 BBY date.
    • Added
  • Link to Sexes, trooper and clone trooper in the intro.
    • Added
  • 1st tag missing.
    • Added
  • Please tell us who Boss is or just give us his number and commando status (Intro).
    • Fixed
  • You mention a bunker in the intro and a gun emplacement in the body. Which is correct? Clone Commander Lee Talk 11:41, April 5, 2014 (UTC)
    • Oops, fixed!
  • 264 words, but address these objections first. Clone Commander Lee Talk 12:05, April 5, 2014 (UTC)
    • It's going to be more... Manoof (talk) 23:37, April 5, 2014 (UTC)
  • Please reload the infobox. Clone Commander Lee Talk 23:58, April 5, 2014 (UTC)
  • 301 words, I suggest the same procedure as for his compatriot. Clone Commander Lee Talk 00:51, April 6, 2014 (UTC)
Wz
  • The 1 in the name isn't necessary. This is usually done when it's above the first guy therefore starting in 2. Also correct it in the infobox.
    • So this guy would just be "unidentified clone trooper (17's squad)" and the other guy "unidentified clone trooper 2 (17's squad)? Manoof (talk) 03:33, April 6, 2014 (UTC)
      • Precisely, sir. Winterz (talk) 03:43, April 6, 2014 (UTC)
  • Consoles must go, we don't do that, not in these normal situations. Winterz (talk) 01:47, April 6, 2014 (UTC)
    • Looking at other articles that link to, say Xbox, using the whatlinkshere tool, many of the IU articles mention console in bts... Manoof (talk) 03:33, April 6, 2014 (UTC)
      • Alright, it's okay. (personally, I don't like it very much) Winterz (talk) 03:43, April 6, 2014 (UTC)

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