Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified clone trooper (Thrawn)

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Unidentified clone trooper (Thrawn)

(1 ECs/1 Users/2 Total)

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Support

  1. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 10:31, 26 November 2021 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Fan26 (Talk) 13:12, 28 November 2021 (UTC)

Object

Fan
  • Gender should be pipelinked through the pronouns in the intro and biography. Fan26 (Talk) 13:21, 26 November 2021 (UTC)
Luca
  • Word count is at 157, sectioning should be removed. LucaRoR CIS roundel (Talk) 14:02, 28 November 2021 (UTC)
    • We've addressed this :) -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol (talk) 04:29, 3 December 2021 (UTC)
Lewis
  • Infobox exlcusive info.
    • Tan skin color? Fixed. -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol (talk) 18:13, 10 December 2021 (UTC)
  • In line with rule 6, I'm sure you can reword the BTS to reduce the amount of references to the comic issue Lewisr (talk) 04:33, 3 December 2021 (UTC)
  • If we have a starting date for the novel, why hasn't it been included instead of saying 'At some point early in the Imperial Era'? Lewisr (talk) 04:35, 3 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Missing the SW.com preview (which depicts the clone) for the issue in sources, as well as stating it was where the clone was first pictured in the BTS.
    • Added this, though I may not be able to keep the body above 164 words and the total below 250. -- YakovChaimTzvi (he/him/his) ChissAscendancyCanonSymbol (talk) 18:21, 10 December 2021 (UTC)
  • I feel like it would be better to explain why the Imperials went to the world in the first paragraph, and then include that Thrawn was in exile there in the second paragraph. Currently it just seems kind of randomly included where it is. Lewisr (talk) 05:10, 3 December 2021 (UTC)
  • Thrawn revealed what he did to the trooper to Barris/Parck/Vanto when he was later captured, I feel like this should be included and what he says probably replacing the current quote in the biography Lewisr (talk) 18:20, 10 December 2021 (UTC)
Macaroni
  • No room for second image. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 04:38, 3 December 2021 (UTC)
  • "The trooper expressed surprise and then pain when Thrawn ambushed and attacked him." How is this personality and traits? It's just a regular human reaction. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 06:17, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

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