Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified clone trooper (Haurgab)

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Unidentified clone trooper (Haurgab)

  • Nominated by: 501st dogma 17:45, January 3, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:death by Kaski-throwing food tray

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  1. Lee
    • This clone trooper was a trooper who served in the Grand Army of the Republic during the Clone Wars. During the course of the war, he served with the 85th Infantry Brigade.: Two times "trooper" and two times "during" in a short order. Please replace both once.
      • Done, though I had to use amid in one of the durings place--501st dogma 13:18, January 4, 2012 (UTC)
  2. *A date is needed in the intro.
      • I mentioned that the Clone Wars started in 21 BBY--501st dogma 13:18, January 4, 2012 (UTC)
        • Please remember that "Clone Wárs" is capitalized. You need to mention 19 BBY too, as it is his death date. Clone Commander Lee Talk 13:35, January 4, 2012 (UTC)
          • Ok, I've done that--501st dogma 16:32, January 4, 2012 (UTC)
    • Context on Haurgab and the 85th in the intro.
    • Clone Wars need to be mentioned in the bio.
    • You give 19 BBY as death date in the infobox and circa 19 BBY in the bio. Check witch one is correct and keep it.
      • The book says he died a month and a half after 940 ABG. Is that 19 BBY or 20 BBY, because I think the date is almost in between both years. I've changed them both to just 19 BBY but I want to make sure its correct--501st dogma 16:32, January 4, 2012 (UTC)
    • Context on Scorch.
      • I've cleaned that part up but what exactly do you want?--501st dogma 13:18, January 4, 2012 (UTC)
        • Describe what Scorch is. E.g. the Republic Clone Commando RC-1262, nicknamed Scorch. Clone Commander Lee Talk 13:35, January 4, 2012 (UTC)
          • Ok, I've done that--501st dogma 16:32, January 4, 2012 (UTC)
    • His height needs to be mentioned in a P&T section.
      • P&T and BtS sections done, though the latter is kind of small.--501st dogma 13:18, January 4, 2012 (UTC)
        • You can expand this by adding info that Order 66 was the fourth novel of the RC series and its publishing date.
    • Behind the scenes section is missing. If you add this and adress several objections, especially those who need context, the article could easily become a GAN. I'll keep the decision up to you, but I highly recommend it. Clone Commander Lee Talk 20:52, January 3, 2012 (UTC)
      • Ok, thanks for the suggestion. should I just move the nomination once I am done cleaning up the article?--501st dogma 13:18, January 4, 2012 (UTC)
        • The article is already over 250 words and therefore not able to be a CAN. The article therefore has to be removed from the CAN page and re-nommed at the GAN. Clone Commander Lee Talk 13:35, January 4, 2012 (UTC)
          • Do you just want me to cut this here and paste it in the GAN?--501st dogma 16:32, January 4, 2012 (UTC)
          • No, no. This nomination has to be archived and a whole new has to be created. However, you better consult the GAN and CAN page or somebody from the EduCorps than me. Clone Commander Lee Talk 16:41, January 4, 2012 (UTC)
          • If this does indeed need to be taken to the GAN, you can wait until all the current objections are taken care of if you wish. That way, you can go to the GAN with a fresh plate. If that's what you want to do, make a note here when you're done fixing the objections, and I, or some one else, will archive the article so it can be nominated on the GAN page. Cheers!—Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 20:46, January 4, 2012 (UTC)
    • Source the whole body. Clone Commander Lee Talk 13:35, January 4, 2012 (UTC)
      • I've sourced the more important points--501st dogma 21:27, January 4, 2012 (UTC)
        • I think Lee meant to source the whole body. Per policy, the whole body must be sourced.—Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 21:34, January 4, 2012 (UTC)
          • I've now sourced the entire body--501st dogma 22:46, January 4, 2012 (UTC)
    • More to come. Clone Commander Lee Talk 13:35, January 4, 2012 (UTC)
    • That he is a Human male needs to be in the bio.
    • Also why do you source the fact that he is a human clone to the encyclopedia? Both is said in the novel.
      • fixed, sorry about that.--501st dogma 22:11, January 5, 2012 (UTC)
    • Adress these and I'll give it a closer look when it is a GAN. Clone Commander Lee Talk 18:13, January 5, 2012 (UTC)
    • Ok, I think its ready to be transfered to the GAN.--501st dogma 22:11, January 5, 2012 (UTC)
      • Okay, I'll let Lee go ahead and strike his objections if he's done, then I'll archive it.—Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 22:13, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

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