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Unidentified captain (Javelin)
- Nominated by: VergenceScatter (talk) 00:39, 8 November 2023 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
- Date Archived: 23:47, 10 November 2023 (UTC)
- Final word count: 72 words (0 introduction, 50 body, 22 behind the scenes)
- WookieeProject (optional): WP:AMB
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Support
Lewisr (talk) 00:21, 10 November 2023 (UTC)
Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 00:41, 10 November 2023 (UTC)
—spookywillowwtalk 23:46, 10 November 2023 (UTC)
Object
Lew
The pronouns are in the wrong field and infobox exclusive, you'll also need the relevant categoryLewisr (talk) 04:01, 8 November 2023 (UTC)That the captain served the Dark Empire is also infobox exclusiveLewisr (talk) 04:01, 8 November 2023 (UTC)- Should both be fixed, thanks VergenceScatter (talk) 06:09, 8 November 2023 (UTC)
- Pronouns still need to be used in the body, and I think you can list Imperial Navy in the infobox if it's an appliable affiliation Lewisr (talk) 05:42, 9 November 2023 (UTC)
- Added both. VergenceScatter (talk) 19:29, 9 November 2023 (UTC)
- Please let me know if this change is okay? Lewisr (talk) 19:47, 9 November 2023 (UTC)
- All good VergenceScatter (talk) 00:15, 10 November 2023 (UTC)
- Please let me know if this change is okay? Lewisr (talk) 19:47, 9 November 2023 (UTC)
- Added both. VergenceScatter (talk) 19:29, 9 November 2023 (UTC)
- Pronouns still need to be used in the body, and I think you can list Imperial Navy in the infobox if it's an appliable affiliation Lewisr (talk) 05:42, 9 November 2023 (UTC)
- Should both be fixed, thanks VergenceScatter (talk) 06:09, 8 November 2023 (UTC)
Any reason you changed the actions of the captain from here compared with Javelin, as in ramming vs piloting?Lewisr (talk) 05:42, 9 November 2023 (UTC)- Not really, I just wanted to have some variety between the articles. Also, "Piloted" is the word actually in TEGTW and I wanted to avoid directly copying their language a little. VergenceScatter (talk) 19:29, 9 November 2023 (UTC)
Anil
If we don't know that the captain served in the Galactic Empire for sure, I think the Galactic Empire member categories should be removed.Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 21:38, 9 November 2023 (UTC)
- Removed VergenceScatter (talk) 00:15, 10 November 2023 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 23:46, 10 November 2023 (UTC)