Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified bully

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Unidentified bully

• Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:57, March 15, 2014 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: A sub-nom for Harsh

(4 ECs/3 Users/4 Total)

Support

1. These kids nowadays. Don't even know how to tie down a pumpkin. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 11:55, March 15, 2014 (UTC)
2. Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 19:09, March 15, 2014 (UTC)
3. Manoof (talk) 09:55, March 21, 2014 (UTC)
4. 501st dogma^(talk) 20:12, April 2, 2014 (UTC)
5. - Princess GLG 19:46, April 9, 2014 (UTC)
6. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 19:30, April 11, 2014 (UTC)
7. Thought I voted on this already :P Supreme Emperor (talk) 19:58, April 15, 2014 (UTC)

Object

SE

• "and smashed the bully's face with." Somethings missing at the end of this sentence. Supreme Emperor (talk) 14:07, March 15, 2014 (UTC)
  • Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:48, March 15, 2014 (UTC)
• I assume it doesn't state why he decided to smash the toy? Supreme Emperor (talk) 14:50, March 27, 2014 (UTC)
  • Nope. Also sorry for delay, I'm on a field trip in Spain with zero wifi, although I was told there would be some... I'm currently using a cafés. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:08, April 9, 2014 (UTC)

Manoof

• Maybe mention how he smashed the toy, i'm assuming it's the rock. The way it is now it could be possible he stomped on it with his foot whilst holding a rock. Manoof (talk) 03:22, March 17, 2014 (UTC)
  • Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:28, March 20, 2014 (UTC)

501st

• Very minor: "...belonging to the Human Harsh when he was a child." The "he" here makes it unclear as to whether the bully was a child or Harsh was a child. 501st dogma^(talk) 17:53, March 29, 2014 (UTC)
  • Think it's now clarified. Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:07, March 30, 2014 (UTC)

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