Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified balding Human (Jabba's Palace)

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Unidentified balding Human (Jabba's Palace)

Nominated by: Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 00:03, September 7, 2011 (UTC)
Nomination comments:Starting noms from my favorite movie.

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)

Support

To the sum of my knowledge, though I can't say anything about adaptations and whatnot. This is also assuming Exiled Jedi's objections are satisfied. Hanzo Hasashi 21:43, September 8, 2011 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 23:01, September 22, 2011 (UTC)
Good stuff. Keep 'em coming! Also, I moved the page, as there's more than one unidentified balding Human in canon (just look at the nom below!)Menkooroo 05:01, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Context needed on Han Solo and his friends, as well as the Skirmish at Carkoon, which isn't even linked/pipelinked. Check out articles such as Rayc Ryjerd and Cane Adiss, both of whom were also onscreen in Jabba's Palace and on the Khetanna, for a more ideal way to write up the article. Hanzo Hasashi 12:58, September 7, 2011 (UTC)
- See how that looks. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 14:34, September 7, 2011 (UTC)
  - Though in a way they were still trying to rescue Han, during the Carkoon battle all of them were captives who were going to be executed, but fought back. This is not what the article seems to say. And also it might be better to just say the sail barge was destroyed during that last stand, what it says right now implies all of them had a role in its destruction, when that was just Luke and Leia. Hanzo Hasashi 18:36, September 7, 2011 (UTC)
    - See how that works, though I don't want to add too much more to it for fear of getting off of the person I'm writing the article about. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 21:07, September 8, 2011 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi
- ~~From the image I would say he was seen on the sail barge, so I would mention that he was on the sail barge. This would really add to the part of the article about the rescue of Han Solo.~~
  - See how that looks.
- ~~Did he appear in Jabba's Palace? I'm unsure because the image is clearly from the sail barge due to the slitted windows.~~--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 21:33, September 8, 2011 (UTC)
  - Umm, I believe so. I'll have to check to make sure. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 21:36, September 8, 2011 (UTC)
    - Many of the sail barge characters were previously seen in Jabba's Palace, but I'm not sure about all of them. Sompeetalay is a user who is good at spotting obscure characters in the films, if you need any help. Hanzo Hasashi 21:40, September 8, 2011 (UTC)
      - Yes, he actually is. Thanks to some help from Sompeetalay, I found him in Jabba's Palace. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 02:23, September 10, 2011 (UTC)
- ~~I would get someone to check all of the adaptations just to make sure that he isn't pictured in any of them.~~--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 12:51, September 10, 2011 (UTC)
  - Menk is helping me with the ANH articles, so I'll see if he, or someone else, can help. (Got anything for me, Menk? :P) Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 03:10, September 11, 2011 (UTC)
    - Thanks to Menk, I believe they have been covered. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 15:32, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Rogaine
- ~~Does Behind the Magic actually make a reference to him, or is (Picture only) appropriate?~~
  - I added this, as IMO the script does mention him very indirectly as one of Jabba's court members, and the whole script is in BTM. I can't say whether he's pictured in it or not though. Hanzo Hasashi 15:30, October 6, 2011 (UTC)
    - I've gone ahead and removed it. I think that a reference to a group of people has to be a fairly small group to be considered an indirect mention; "Jabba's courtmembers" is probably a bit too big.
- ~~Hide the table of contents.~~
  - Got it.
- I recommend going through the article and adding more detail on the brief account that's given of the first half hour of Jedi. Brevity is definitely good, but I think a little bit more detail is needed. Start by giving some context on Han Solo, and then read through the article and see if it will make sense to someone who's never seen the film before. Who takes them to the pit? Why will it kill them to be given to a Sarlacc ("fed" might be a good word)?
  - I think I got it.
    - Good show. I added a few more words; see what you think.
- What scenes is the bald guy present for in the palace? The article should briefly detail any conversations he overhears or any actions he participates in --- if he's one of the guys jeering when Oola or Luke is thrown to the Rancor, etc. Menkooroo 07:39, October 6, 2011 (UTC)
  - And I think I got that.--Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 02:47, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

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