Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified Yavin Runner II pilot

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Unidentified Yavin Runner II pilot

  • Nominated by: Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 02:41, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:We'll be arriving at CA status in just a few minutes.

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)

Support

  1. ECvote Please place seats in the upright position and lock tray tables ~SavageBOB sig 16:08, July 29, 2011 (UTC)
  2. <Laser Fire> Sorry we are experiencing slight turbulence, please stand by. <Explosion>--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 18:16, July 29, 2011 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Menkooroo 02:32, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Object

  1. Exiled Jedi
    • I think that you probably could determine the eye color for the pilot.
      • OK.
    • Also, mention the type of uniform he was wearing.
      • How's that?
    • When you say "the swampy moon of Yavin 4" it could either read that Yavin 4 was a swampy moon, or that Yavin 4 had a swampy moon. Please reword so that it is easily apparent which you mean.
      • See how that works.
    • Mention his affiliation to the New Jedi Order in the body of the article.--Exiled Jedi Oldrepublic crest (Greetings) 03:55, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
  2. Bob
    • You should probably add a reference for the uniform being similar to the ones in the Battle of Yavin.
      • Done.
    • Please add categories for species and gender. ~SavageBOB sig 20:02, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
    • One more thing: Is Yavin 4 ever described as swampy? I've usually seen it as "forested" or "jungle". ~SavageBOB sig 13:43, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
      • Hmm, I seem to recall that in one of the NJO books it is described as swampy. But, since I can't remember which one it was, I changed it. Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 15:28, July 28, 2011 (UTC)
  3. Just wanna check --- is it not "the" Yavin Runner II? Our article on Yavin Runner II uses "the." Menkooroo 16:28, August 7, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

  • I notice that in a lot of your noms, you start with "This [whatever] did [whatever]..." I don't really have a problem with this, but a lot of folks consider "This" as inappropriate to our articles since it doesn't sound like "a long time ago." Pay attention to the way I've bee copy editing your articles, and you'll see how to avoid this issue. :) ~SavageBOB sig 20:02, July 27, 2011 (UTC)
    • I noticed that most other users user "A pilot did whatever" but I thought that it sounded like it was describing a pilot in general rather than this pilot. But, I'll agree with your experience. Cal JediInfinite Empire (Personal Comm Channel) 02:09, July 28, 2011 (UTC)