Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified Yavin 4 monster

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.

Unidentified Yavin 4 monster

• Nominated by: Trip391 (talk) 06:43, January 5, 2014 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Novels and Barn-Burner

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Object

1. SE
   • Needs a NOTOC
     • Done
   • Also, no intro required
     • Done
       • Actually, it is required with an article of this size. I'm getting about 210 words when I use spell check. Please re-add it Trip. 501st dogma^(talk) 19:15, January 6, 2014 (UTC)
         • Re-added Trip391 (talk) 21:09, January 6, 2014 (UTC)
   • Any applicable quotes? Supreme Emperor (talk) 04:43, January 6, 2014 (UTC)
     • Added another one Trip391 (talk) 04:50, January 6, 2014 (UTC)
2. 501st
   • First of all, the intro is rather short. At least make it two sentences. If that brings it over 250, we can just send it to the GAN page.
     • Lengthened
       • It would be nice it you added that it existed on the moon by 23 ABY.
         • Got it Trip391 (talk) 22:53, January 8, 2014 (UTC)
   • Please note that the layout you are currently using is not meant for non-sentient species. Here is the formal layout, and using it would involve splitting the Description into two sections: Biology and appearance, and Behavior. Please do so.
     • Split
   • It should be added to the body that it is carnivorous.
     • Done
   • Context on the Lightning Rod, Peckum, the two Solos, and Tenal Ka is needed. Yavin 4 also needs context in the body.
     • Done
   • Is this article about the monster itself, or the monster's species? I just want to clarify.
     • The species, and I based the way I wrote it off of snow monster Trip391 (talk) 06:54, January 7, 2014 (UTC)
   • When you create the Behavior section, add in there that its habitat is the jungle.
     • Done Trip391 (talk) 06:54, January 7, 2014 (UTC)
   • These objections will probably take it over 250 words, but I will continue my review here if you like, and we can archive it when I'm satisfied. Good work. 501st dogma^(talk) 00:00, January 7, 2014 (UTC)
   • Sentience needs to be mentioned in the body and the intro. 501st dogma^(talk) 18:45, January 7, 2014 (UTC)
     • Done Trip391 (talk) 06:02, January 8, 2014 (UTC)
   • I still think the intro needs to be a bit longer. How about adding mention of Luke's encounter with one?
     • Done
   • I think an article should be made for the individual monster.
     • Like the snow monster article, I don't really think there should be a completely separate article, since most of the information therein would be the same as this one Trip391 (talk) 07:28, January 12, 2014 (UTC)
   • After you complete the two above, I'll can archive the nom if you like. 501st dogma^(talk) 14:58, January 11, 2014 (UTC)

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