Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified Twi'lek Dark Jedi (Tràkata)

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Unidentified Twi'lek Dark Jedi (Tràkata)‎

• Nominated by: —Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 04:45, March 29, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: And another…

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Support

1. 501st dogma^(talk) 11:55, March 29, 2013 (UTC)
2. Commander Code-8 ^{G'day, mate} 10:50, April 1, 2013 (UTC)
3. ~Savage 13:38, April 6, 2013 (UTC)
4. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 17:28, April 6, 2013 (UTC)

Object

1. Exiled Jedi
   • Your first reference has some issues...
   • Your second reference has the wrong set name in it.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 17:56, April 1, 2013 (UTC)
     • Both fixed.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 18:47, April 1, 2013 (UTC)
2. Bob
   • SImilar to the noms above, you tell us in the first sentence that "A Dark Jedi ... fell to the dark side." Can you reword the intro like you did with the Jedi entires?
   • It's unclear whose lightsaber the Sullustan shut off.
   • Separate out clothing from physical appearance and indicate that "At the time of the battle..." he wore those clothes. ~Savage 11:26, April 5, 2013 (UTC)
     • Please try them.—Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 16:09, April 5, 2013 (UTC)

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