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Unidentified Pyke (counterfeit credits)
- Nominated by: ThePedantry (talk) 01:07, 14 July 2025 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
- Date Archived: 19:33, 19 August 2025 (UTC)
- Final word count: 383 words (26 introduction, 222 body, 135 behind the scenes)
- Word count at nomination time: 245 words (0 introduction, 154 body, 91 behind the scenes)
- WookieeProject (optional): Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Video Games
(2 ECs/0 Users/2 Total)
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Support votes
—spookywillowwtalk 00:50, 12 August 2025 (UTC)
Lewisr (talk) 20:46, 12 August 2025 (UTC)
Objections
spookly
The portion in Gamemechanics could do with a lead-in of "The same year," or "That year," or something. With it starting as "They eventually..." it makes it sound like it could be at any point or fairly past 3 ABY.—spookywillowwtalk 00:04, 12 August 2025 (UTC)- Good catch, updated. ThePedantry (talk) 00:18, 12 August 2025 (UTC)
Ayrehead
- You should include where the Pyke meets Kay to recruit her and probably the test to see if she can spot the fake credit as well. Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:42, 18 August 2025 (UTC)
Comments
- Review note: copy-edit be careful of end punctuation not being placed inside "; have noticed it on a few noms of yours recently. Not a huge issue to copy-edit but should be avoided from the get-go if possible, per MOS.—spookywillowwtalk 00:51, 12 August 2025 (UTC)
- Thanks, I'll try to keep a better eye out for those. ThePedantry (talk) 01:10, 12 August 2025 (UTC)