Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified Nightbrother village

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Comprehensive article nomination that was withdrawn. Please do not modify it.

Unidentified Nightbrother village

• Nominated by: AmazinglyCool (talk) 01:32, 24 November 2021 (UTC)
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Luca

• I think there can be much more detail about what Kestis did in the village and how and why he was there.
  • Added more detail. AmazinglyCool (talk) 17:15, 26 November 2021 (UTC)
• How can we be sure that the Night brothers that lived in the village were the same as the ones in SOD? LucaRoR ^(Talk) 15:34, 24 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Both of these groups were led by Viscus and thus can both assumed to be Viscus' clan. AmazinglyCool (talk) 13:03, 26 November 2021 (UTC)
• Nightbrother Dungeon should be mentioned in the body and, perhaps, in the infobox. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 13:27, 26 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Added. AmazinglyCool (talk) 17:15, 26 November 2021 (UTC)
• Please, make sure to be ok with this copy-edit.
  • Looks fine. AmazinglyCool (talk) 18:26, 26 November 2021 (UTC)
• "Nightbrothers in the village became tired of waiting for Merrin's instructions." So did they do something or did they remain still?
  • Added more information. AmazinglyCool (talk) 18:26, 26 November 2021 (UTC)
• Word count is currently 168; sectioning is needed.
  • Sectioned. AmazinglyCool (talk) 18:26, 26 November 2021 (UTC)
• Context for the Tomb of Kujet would be nice.
  • Added context. AmazinglyCool (talk) 18:26, 26 November 2021 (UTC)
• In the infobox, the first reference note currently doesn't explain what's the reasoning behind the fact that the village was built after the Second Battle of Dathomir. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 17:38, 26 November 2021 (UTC)
  • Added to reference. AmazinglyCool (talk) 18:26, 26 November 2021 (UTC)
    • I gave it a copy-edit, plese check if everything is still accurate to the sources.
      • Still looks good. AmazinglyCool (talk) 21:09, 26 November 2021 (UTC)
• References should be removed from the intro.
  • Removed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 21:09, 26 November 2021 (UTC)
• I don't see the need of reference 5.
  • Removed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 21:09, 26 November 2021 (UTC)
• Not a strong objection, but "History" could probably use an image.
  • Added an image. AmazinglyCool (talk) 21:09, 26 November 2021 (UTC)
• Have you checked the official JFO trailers for a possible appearance of the village? LucaRoR ^(Talk) 19:33, 26 November 2021 (UTC)
  • I have checked the trailers and there is no depiction of the village. AmazinglyCool (talk) 21:09, 26 November 2021 (UTC)
• Word count is at 257. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 08:24, 27 November 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• Can an EC close this CAN so I can renominate this article as a GAN. AmazinglyCool (talk) 23:46, 27 November 2021 (UTC)