- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Unidentified Naboo homestead owner
- Nominated by: Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 20:49, August 3, 2010 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Brave man running across the field in a battle
(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)
Support
- QuiGonJinn
(Talk) 15:32, August 15, 2010 (UTC) 
SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is the truth) 10:36, August 17, 2010 (UTC)- Menkooroo 15:01, August 25, 2010 (UTC)
- Cavalier One
(Squadron channel) 20:15, September 11, 2010 (UTC) - I made some minor tweaks; take a look. -- 1358 (Talk) 20:26, September 11, 2010 (UTC)
Object
How do you know that he is a Human and a Naboo native? It is not stated in the game. All we know is that he was a male who lived on Naboo by 32 BBY; it was not necessarily his homeworld.QuiGonJinn(Talk) 08:51, August 5, 2010 (UTC)
- He runs across the screen and has the same sprite of the other human civilians, and "homeworld" is used in the general sense of place of residence. I once saw a Talk Page post explaining the nuances.
- Hmm, I have not noticed him running around before. Every time I saved him, he was driving a vehicle, but I'll take your word on it. Regarding homeworld, no, it is always used in a sense of the place where the individual was born and/or spent his youth. QuiGonJinn (Talk) 11:23, August 11, 2010 (UTC)
- He runs out right when the second wave of STAPS appear. Talk page discussion:[[1]]. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 15:58, August 11, 2010 (UTC)
- Hmm, I have not noticed him running around before. Every time I saved him, he was driving a vehicle, but I'll take your word on it. Regarding homeworld, no, it is always used in a sense of the place where the individual was born and/or spent his youth. QuiGonJinn
Unidentified is not to be used inside an actual article.Please standardize your capitalization of homestead.SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 05:48, August 17, 2010 (UTC)- Nixed. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 10:00, August 17, 2010 (UTC)
- He runs across the screen and has the same sprite of the other human civilians, and "homeworld" is used in the general sense of place of residence. I once saw a Talk Page post explaining the nuances.
- Cav
Since he apparently has dialogue, do we know who voiced him?- Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 09:46, September 3, 2010 (UTC)
- Well, there are several options, such as "Escapee," "Male farmer" or even Ned Greely. There just is no way to tell. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 20:00, September 11, 2010 (UTC)
- Xd1358
Could you start the article like "This human Male owned a homestead...", because the current wording almost implies that the article title is not conjectural?- Add that he lives in the Naboo countryside.
- Please find a synonym for "man," such as "individual."
- "This man appears as a side-quest in the video game Star Wars: Battle for Naboo." I think he rather appears in a side-quest.
- Release date for BfN?
"…and fulfill a bonus objective." Is saving him the bonus objective or do you need to save him so that you can fulfill the objective?- -- 1358 (Talk) 12:54, September 7, 2010 (UTC)
- All of the above addresed, but did I bold correctly? And thanks for checking it out. Corellian PremierAll along the watchtower 20:00, September 11, 2010 (UTC)
Comments
- Note some of the changes I made --- in particular, it's always advisable to mention the species and sex in the article's body, and one-sentence paragraphs should be avoided. Good work, though! Menkooroo 15:01, August 25, 2010 (UTC)