Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified Muun youngling

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Unidentified Muun youngling

• Nominated by: 501st Dogma^(Comlink) 21:48, March 7, 2012 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:Poor guy, splattered on the courtyard floor...

(2 ECs/5 Users/7 Total)

Support

1. Best novel evah! Plagueis327 22:50, March 7, 2012 (UTC)
2. nayayen★talk 09:00, March 9, 2012 (UTC)
3. Tinwe^(comlink) 09:54, March 9, 2012 (UTC)
4. NaruHina ^Talk 17:08, March 9, 2012 (UTC)
5. Poor kid.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 23:51, March 9, 2012 (UTC)
6. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 09:56, March 10, 2012 (UTC)
7. graestan^(talk) 16:20, March 16, 2012 (UTC)
8. Since I apparently f#c%e8 with this.... Also, it's good to have comprehensive articles on ridiculously trivial stuff, because, you know, "working our way upwards." --R5-X41238-G8-R3-3124-D2 16:29, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Object

1. Rubedo
   • If you have questions about my changes, feels free to ask. One I want to point out specifically though is that unidentified articles are to be started with "A" rather than "This" because people think it works better. Just FYI.
     • Thanks for the heads up. 501st Dogma^(Comlink) 00:06, March 8, 2012 (UTC)
   • Context on Caar Damask.
     • Added 501st Dogma^(Comlink) 00:06, March 8, 2012 (UTC)
   • "who would eventually be known to a select few as Darth Plagueis." Is this really necessary to this character's article?
     • Removed 501st Dogma^(Comlink) 00:06, March 8, 2012 (UTC)
   • Link to Damask clan somewhere in the body.
     • Done (added before "residence") 501st Dogma^(Comlink) 00:06, March 8, 2012 (UTC)
   • "Early in his life," This is phrased oddly since it reads like he died shortly thereafter, making it actually later in his lifespan.
     • Changed
   • NaruHina ^Talk 23:25, March 7, 2012 (UTC)
     • Thanks for the review. 501st Dogma^(Comlink) 00:06, March 8, 2012 (UTC)
   • Could you be specific in the prose that Hego was using the Force? Was it an accidental use? NaruHina ^Talk 02:43, March 8, 2012 (UTC)
     • Fixed. Hego know he had "power" over other younglings then, so it was intentional. 501st Dogma^(Comlink) 01:35, March 9, 2012 (UTC)
2. Lee's charge
   • Date of death and place of death in the infobox? Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 14:45, March 8, 2012 (UTC)
     • No specific year given, so I'm not sure when exactly it took place. 501st Dogma^(Comlink) 01:35, March 9, 2012 (UTC)
       • Do you know a time (e.g. between 200 and 100 BBY) when it took place? It would be fine if you place just an approximately date. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 12:42, March 9, 2012 (UTC)
         • That as specific as it can get. I have not done an age range before, so it might be formatted wrong. 501st Dogma^(Comlink) 21:11, March 9, 2012 (UTC)
           • Perfect. Clone Commander Lee ^Talk 09:56, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

1. I'll create the redlink soon. 501st Dogma^(Comlink) 21:48, March 7, 2012 (UTC)
   • Red links killed with the help of R5-X41238-G8-R3-3124-D2 501st Dogma^(Comlink) 23:19, March 7, 2012 (UTC)
2. Was he called a "youngling" in the book? NaruHina ^Talk 02:43, March 8, 2012 (UTC)
   • Yes, I'm pretty sure he was. I'll check it over later, but if I remember correctly it stated a "Muun youngling". 501st Dogma^(Comlink) 01:35, March 9, 2012 (UTC)