Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified Mos Eisley woman

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Unidentified Mos Eisley woman

• Nominated by: Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 21:43, September 3, 2011 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:I'm finding lots of movie noms.

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)

Support

1. Looks good to me. Hanzo Hasashi 03:36, September 13, 2011 (UTC)
2. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 01:43, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
3. Good work. Menkooroo 14:32, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Object

• Context on Luke and Obi-Wan needed I think, maybe also why they were in Mos Eisley? Hanzo Hasashi 14:11, September 12, 2011 (UTC)
  • I believe I got it. I wasn't sure what sort of context Luke should have at that point, so check that outCal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 03:23, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

• The first sentence is a run-on.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 17:00, October 4, 2011 (UTC)
  • Sized it down.--Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 01:03, October 5, 2011 (UTC)
    • I reworded it slightly.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 01:43, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

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