Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified Mon Calamari (Mon Cala)

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Unidentified Mon Calamari (Mon Cala)

• Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 00:57, 3 May 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Sorry, RattsT. :P

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Support

1. Great job! ~ D MCCG (chat) 22:31, 4 May 2021 (UTC)
2. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 06:06, 6 May 2021 (UTC)
3. Fan26 (Talk) 23:13, 6 May 2021 (UTC)
4. Editoronthewiki (talk) 23:36, 6 May 2021 (UTC)
5. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 05:59, 9 May 2021 (UTC)

Object

Editor

• You wrote "the the explosion" in the last line--Editoronthewiki (talk) 01:18, 3 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Fixed. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 02:00, 3 May 2021 (UTC)

CC-8

• The Quarren saboteur seems notable enough, it would be better to link them rather than the species even if it is conjectural. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 04:44, 3 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Done. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 21:47, 3 May 2021 (UTC)
• Skin and eye colors and clothing can all be detailed. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 01:04, 4 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Good catch, added. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 22:25, 4 May 2021 (UTC)

Fan

• The infobox is missing the skin and eye colors. Fan26 (Talk) 14:11, 6 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Handled via discord. Fan26 (Talk) 23:13, 6 May 2021 (UTC)

OOM

• Am I mistaken to say that the comic takes place in Dac City? I'm basing off the Allegiance 4 article and my memory here.
  • Added.
• Does the comic state that Mon Cala was a planet?
  • Yes.
• Context for Leia and Ackbar needed. You can say that they're part of the Resistance.
  • I don't think this is 100% necessary, but added.
• I believe some context for the location of the Mon Calamari relative to the location of the exploding shuttle would help. Were they in the same building, or were they further apart?
  • There's no way of knowing how far apart they were, and they were outside, not in a building.
• "shielding them from the explosion" Should specify who Rey was shielding OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 00:10, 9 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Clarified. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 03:44, 9 May 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 15:59, 11 May 2021 (UTC)