Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified Imperial officer (Chimaera)

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Unidentified Imperial officer (Chimaera)

• Nominated by: Samonic ^(Talk) 16:49, 3 December 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:CHISS WP:NOVELS WP:AMB

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

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Support

1. —spookywilloww^talk 21:19, 6 December 2022 (UTC)
2. BloodOfIrizi (talk) 23:48, 13 December 2022 (UTC)
3. Manoof (he/him/his) 10:38, 22 December 2022 (UTC)
4. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 12:38, 22 December 2022 (UTC)

Object

Spooky

• "...helped Imperial Court member Lord Odo—who was secretly the[1] Storm-hair[3] Warlord Nuso Esva—move his possessions..."Unaware of the novel's exact context on how this goes down, but basing off other SAs, would it be better to instead go: "...helped the Storm-hair Warlord Nuso Esva—who was posing as an Imperial Court member under the name Lord Ordo—move his possessions..." The ordering of the way it is currently makes it seem as if being Esva was his not his actual identity; that he was actually Ordo, and not just posing under the name.
• Double use of "considered" in the last sentence, might be nice to reword.—spookywilloww^talk 13:48, 6 December 2022 (UTC)
  • Both done. I'm surprised I didn't see the double "considered" before nominating the article. Samonic ^(Talk) 14:24, 6 December 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 12:38, 22 December 2022 (UTC)