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Unidentified Imperial governor (Madelin Sun)

  • Nominated by: Lewisr (talk) 03:11, 8 November 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 22:24, 13 November 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 287 words (0 introduction, 162 body, 125 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:COMICS WP:AMBITION

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Support

  1. VergenceScatter (talk) 06:13, 8 November 2023 (UTC)
  2. Panther436 (talk) 02:23, 10 November 2023 (UTC)
  3. OOM 224 (he/him) 13:58, 12 November 2023 (UTC)
  4. ECvote TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 16:45, 13 November 2023 (UTC)
  5. ECvote —spookywillowwtalk 22:23, 13 November 2023 (UTC)

Object

Panther
  • The main paragraph could use a break, probably before either the sentence that begins with 'afterward' or the one that starts with and 'after'
    • I have an issue with this sometimes :P but split Lewisr (talk) 02:02, 9 November 2023 (UTC)
  • I'd recommend expanding the quotes just a tiny bit in the Bts to make it more obvious that the word 'local' was dropped in the HS&C issue Panther436 (talk) 23:47, 8 November 2023 (UTC)
    • I think that I didn't include it in the quote but did in the CR3 instance, coupled with also noting what the exact quote was in a quote section in the BTS should be enough to make it clear it was dropped. Made a slight change though, how's that? Lewisr (talk) 02:02, 9 November 2023 (UTC)
      • Slight further update, it seems I added the local bit in by mistake, doesn't seem to actually be there in any version of the CR material Lewisr (talk) 01:05, 10 November 2023 (UTC)
      • Sorry, for reference I just meant that even just adding the word 'the' would make more clear than starting with a word that was dropped Panther436 (talk) 02:23, 10 November 2023 (UTC)
        • Understood, thanks Lewisr (talk) 02:38, 10 November 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 22:23, 13 November 2023 (UTC)