Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified H'nemthe patron

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[[Unidentified H'nemthe patron]]

  • Nominated by: Menkooroo 05:20, January 19, 2011 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: How I also pine for M'iiyoom Onith... *hopelessly romantic sigh*...

(1 ECs/3 Users/4 Total)

Support

  1. Holocron Greatholocron (Complain) 03:15, January 20, 2011 (UTC)
  2. Darth Morrt 16:12, January 20, 2011 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Hee hee.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 15:35, January 21, 2011 (UTC)
  4. OLIOSTER (talk) 05:00, January 23, 2011 (UTC)

Object

  • "[...] Hands of Shon-Ju. They were drawn by Brian Kolchak." Is initially confusing, it would probably flow better if what "they" were is clarified. Other than that, it's a good article. Poor guy. Holocron Greatholocron (Complain) 07:35, January 19, 2011 (UTC)
    • Changed to "the character was." Merci! Menkooroo 16:00, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

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