Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified Gamorrean dancer

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Unidentified Gamorrean dancer

• Nominated by: --LelalMekha (talk) 19:02, October 1, 2012 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Good. Our first silly catch of the day.

(4 ECs/2 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. ~Savage 18:41, October 6, 2012 (UTC)
2. 501st dogma^(talk) 19:19, October 6, 2012 (UTC)
3. Tinwe^(comlink) 10:13, October 19, 2012 (UTC)
4. I wonder if this guy went one to become one of Jabba's palace guards. Commander Code-8 ^{To say hi, press 42} 21:54, October 19, 2012 (UTC)
5. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 19:28, October 21, 2012 (UTC)
6. —Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 00:06, October 22, 2012 (UTC)

Object

1. Could you add his skin color to the main article? Otherwise, great work. 501st dogma^(talk) 20:56, October 3, 2012 (UTC)
   • Fixed. --LelalMekha (talk) 16:54, October 6, 2012 (UTC)
2. You should mention that Fode commented on his dance in the body (but by all means keep the quote). ~Savage 17:33, October 6, 2012 (UTC)
   • Done. Do not hesitate to tell me if you think the wording is not satisfying—it's not easy to talk about one of the heads of a Troig. --LelalMekha (talk) 17:53, October 6, 2012 (UTC)

1. Return of the Jedi
   • Needs some categories.—Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 03:11, October 12, 2012 (UTC)
     • Done. --LelalMekha (talk) 07:28, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

1. Code-8's report
   • the Gamorrean artist was graceful and skilled enough to dance on points. I'm not exactly sure what you mean by points. Could you find some way of explaining what they are? Other than that good job. Commander Code-8 ^{To say hi, press 42} 21:29, October 16, 2012 (UTC)
     • Well, I could use another wording, but I think "dancing on points" is the proper technical term to convey what I mean, which is "the action in dancing of extending one leg and arching the foot so that only the tips of the toes touch the floor." But English is not my first language, after all, so I may be mistaken. --LelalMekha (talk) 10:35, October 19, 2012 (UTC)
       • I think you're right. I like the technical term's usage here. For what it's worth, we actually use the French in English too: "dancing en pointe." I'd keep the technical term, but perhaps add a descriptive phrase. Maybe, "skilled enough to dance en pointe, full weight resting on the tiptoes of a single foot" or some such. ~Savage 12:24, October 19, 2012 (UTC)
         • Just followed your advice and used your suggestion word for word. --LelalMekha (talk) 12:31, October 19, 2012 (UTC)

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