Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified Force Hound

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Unidentified Force Hound

  • Nominated by: FNines (talk) 05:51, 3 March 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 19:18, 18 March 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 179 words (0 introduction, 109 body, 70 behind the scenes)
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(Votes required: 2 EC vote(s) required to reach minimum. Additional 3 user or 1 EC vote required to pass.)

Support

Object

spookly
  • Full comic release date requires its own reference.
    • Done. - FNines (talk) 11:28, 8 March 2023 (UTC)
      • For next time's reference, perhaps take a peek at my copy-edit; usually, offsite url references use {{WebCite}}. I've done it as an example for this one, it's a pretty easy copy-paste to fill them out in the future though!—spookywillowwtalk 02:03, 9 March 2023 (UTC)
  • Judging on the opening pages of the comic, its only dated 'over 36000 years before ANH'—to establish the 25,792 BBY here, a date note is needed for both the article body and the character's death year.
  • Opening page of the comic reflects Jan Duursema as also one of the story's writers, not just the penciller—should be reflected.
    • Is that okay? I've tried to make it clear that there's a distinction between Duursema's 'story by' credit and that of the issue's credited writer John Ostrander. - FNines (talk) 11:28, 8 March 2023 (UTC)
  • Visually, seems like he's wearing a bit of silvery/gray armor that can be noted, to go alongside the mention of the dark robes.—spookywillowwtalk 21:25, 7 March 2023 (UTC)
  • If the Force Hound was indeed named after/tatooed with an Aurebush letter, that should be noted in the biography even if we don't know which. Current precedent is to not have sentences such as the species/gender ones in the BtS, so once the lettering is noted up top, that sentence can be removed.
  • Seems like the Battle of Shikaakwa isn't a formal title (it's conjectural), which means that the event has to be contextualized. This might result in replacing that link with something pipelinked like: "…a battle on the planet Shikaakwa…". For such a line, notedly also important to check whether Shikaakwa's context as a planet can be sourced to the comic—if not, seems like it's own article has a list of sources that can reference that bit!
  • (Review note) Pretty clean CAN on the whole for a new(er?) nominator! Many cheers —spookywillowwtalk 02:03, 9 March 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Vote to remove nomination (EC only)

  1. ECvote Some from the first batch 11 days unaddressed, the rest are 9 days unaddressed.—spookywillowwtalk 19:13, 18 March 2023 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:15, 18 March 2023 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 19:17, 18 March 2023 (UTC)