Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified Dark Jedi (Force drain) (second nomination)

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Unidentified Dark Jedi (Force drain)

• Nominated by: Tomotron ^{(Star Forge)} 04:57, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Thank you JMAS!

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 15:35, 6 July 2021 (UTC)
2. I, too, often find myself thanking JMAS. :P JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 03:23, 9 July 2021 (UTC)
3. Happy to help. JMAS ^{Hey, it's me!} 22:57, 9 July 2021 (UTC)
4. AmazinglyCool (talk) 10:37, 10 July 2021 (UTC)
5. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 03:23, 11 July 2021 (UTC)

Object

• Files and templates need to use underscores in place of spaces (e.g. [[File:Luke_Skywalker.jpg]], not [[File:Luke Skywalker.jpg]])
• It's be better to mention the colours of the armour rather than simply say it's "dark-colored"
• Please see this copy-edit, and apply it to the other Force drain CAN OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 20:35, 5 July 2021 (UTC)
  • For all three, is that better now? —Tomotron ^{(Star Forge)} 02:32, 6 July 2021 (UTC)
    • Yup, that's fine OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 15:35, 6 July 2021 (UTC)

CC-8

• Dark Jedi can be linked on its second mention.
• The skin markings are looking more dark red or burgundy to me, yet the article says they're black. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 02:22, 9 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Done for both, I suppose the markings are more of a burgundy colour. —Tomotron ^{(Star Forge)} 03:59, 9 July 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 15:32, 11 July 2021 (UTC)