Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified Chief of Detectives

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Unidentified Chief of Detectives

• Nominated by: Coruscantfan ^(Talk) 01:06, July 10, 2012 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Who would want this job in a trillion population city?

(1 ECs/3 Users/4 Total)

Support

1. Looks good save for Exiled's objection. 501st dogma^(talk) 12:14, July 14, 2012 (UTC)
2. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 12:36, July 15, 2012 (UTC)
3. Cumulonimbus Cloud ^{(ℳeeting ℛoom)} 00:07, July 18, 2012 (UTC)
4. NaruHina ^Talk 02:14, August 2, 2012 (UTC)

Object

1. Exiled Jedi
   • You should probably create an article for the Bothan ambassador.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 13:00, July 11, 2012 (UTC)
     • Done. Coruscantfan ^(Talk) 04:44, July 15, 2012 (UTC)
2. "Individual" should not be the bolded lead. That's not what makes him notable. "Chief" or, probably better, "police officer" would work instead. NaruHina ^Talk 22:57, July 30, 2012 (UTC)
   • Done. Coruscantfan ^(Talk) 23:10, August 1, 2012 (UTC)

Comments