Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Unidentified Aqualish Jedi

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Unidentified Aqualish Jedi

• Nominated by: QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 18:08, September 9, 2010 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: More Jedi redshirts!

(4 ECs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Provided Xd's objection is fixed. --Eyrezer 04:49, September 10, 2010 (UTC)
2. He's dead, Jim. ~ SavageBob 15:37, September 10, 2010 (UTC)
3. —Jedi Kasra (comlink) 16:45, September 10, 2010 (UTC)
4. -- 1358 ^(Talk) 17:18, September 11, 2010 (UTC)
5. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 04:34, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Object

1. Don't we have a category for unknown gender individuals? -- 1358 ^(Talk) 18:12, September 9, 2010 (UTC)
   • I could have sworn I added that. Well, it's added now.
2. In the last two sentences you twice start with "the Aqualish". Twice it a little bit. Nahdar Vebb 18:15, September 9, 2010 (UTC)
   • Addressed.
3. Can you crop out the text in the infobox image? --Eyrezer 22:25, September 9, 2010 (UTC)
4. Prepare to be savaged...
   • He or she seems to have two eyes and fingers. Identify as a Quara Aqualish?
     • Done.
   • "the Republic was forced to establish..." This sounds POV to me, as if they would have preferred not to do so. Perhaps reword to "The Republic chose to establish" or just "established"? ~ SavageBob 04:53, September 10, 2010 (UTC)
     • This was the exact case. The Republic did not want to establish the blockades, but had to do so after the Valahari joined the Seps. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 07:31, September 10, 2010 (UTC)
       • It still sounds POV-ish to me, like saying, "With the destruction of the World Trade Center, the U.S. was forced to invade Afghanistan to prevent another attack." It privileges the Republic POV over the Separatist one. However, this is just a piddle, so I won't object per se if you feel strongly about keeping it the way it is. ~ SavageBob 15:37, September 10, 2010 (UTC)
         • I was not that inclined to keep it, really, I was just explaining my point. If you feel it's POV, than I don't mind rewording that. Changed it to your wording. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 16:18, September 10, 2010 (UTC)
5. Unidentified is OOU and should not be used. -- 1358 ^(Talk) 17:11, September 10, 2010 (UTC)
   • Really? I thought it was acceptable for the infobox. A number of our current FAs and GAs use it. I changed it, though. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 17:30, September 10, 2010 (UTC)
     • I've seen a few people asserting this, but I don't think we actually have any consensus decision on it. Personally, I don't have a problem with it in the article infobox name. --Eyrezer 20:53, September 10, 2010 (UTC)
6. You need to add where he died to the infobox. (Valahari sector, I'd assume) -- 1358 ^(Talk) 18:46, September 10, 2010 (UTC)
   • I've rechecked the comics, and it appears that the blockades were not limited to the Valahari sector. The Aqualish's place of death is therefore unknown. I've made some adjustments and apologize for the confusion. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 09:32, September 11, 2010 (UTC)
7. Soresu
   • Could you provide some sort of explanation as to what Quara is? Something like "the Quara race" would be sufficient. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is the truth)} 09:53, September 11, 2010 (UTC)
     • Done. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 13:41, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

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