Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Umberbool City

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Umberbool City

• Nominated by: Commander Code-8 ^{To say hi, press 42} 07:08, November 16, 2012 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: I think I have this whole CA wrtiting thingy down pat. More Operation Battlegrounds.

(2 ECs/0 Users/2 Total)

Support

1. 501st dogma^(talk) 13:08, November 19, 2012 (UTC)
2. Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 18:36, November 23, 2012 (UTC)

Object

1. 501st
   • Could you change the text up a bit? Right now, you are using practically the same text for both this and your other city nom. 501st dogma^(talk) 13:28, November 16, 2012 (UTC)
     • There's other CAs that have very similar dialogue, such as Wanted Poster: Han Solo and Wanted Poster: Luke Skywalker. Commander Code-8 ^{To say hi, press 42} 02:34, November 18, 2012 (UTC)
       • It depends on the reviewer, and it's off and on usualy. However, I still think you should change it. 501st dogma^(talk) 00:18, November 19, 2012 (UTC)
         • I've changed some words and reworded the odd sentence. Hope that works. Commander Code-8 ^{To say hi, press 42} 05:04, November 19, 2012 (UTC)
2. Exiled Jedi
   • You need to link to Gungan society somewhere in the article body.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 14:42, November 19, 2012 (UTC)
     • I've linked it to the second mention of Gungans since I couldn't find anywhere else. Commander Code-8 ^{To say hi, press 42} 21:29, November 19, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

1. Can't this be archived now, since it's got 2 EC votes? Commander Code-8 ^{To say hi, press 42} 21:10, December 10, 2012 (UTC)
   • An EC archiver will be with you shortly..... 501st dogma^(talk) 21:16, December 10, 2012 (UTC)