Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Ultra-Light Assault Vehicle/Canon

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Ultra-Light Assault Vehicle/Canon

  • Nominated by: Cwedin (talk) 05:01, September 3, 2015 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: My first nomination and the first page I created.

(1 ECs/3 Users/4 Total)

Support

  1. Sorry for the delay in responding! Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:38, October 18, 2015 (UTC)
  2. Everything looks good here. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 22:04, October 22, 2015 (UTC)
  3. <-Omicron(Leave a message at the BEEP!) 23:56, October 23, 2015 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Very excellent work. Corellian PremierJedi symbolThe Force will be with you always 01:55, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

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A Force user
  1. Hi Cwedin, welcome to the CAN page. Just from a first look, I must ask: does the SW.com page actually mention the ULAV? If not, it isn't needed in the article.
    • It's not there, removed source. Cwedin (talk) 19:35, September 9, 2015 (UTC)
  2. Also, I'd like to know more about its appearances in the game. Is it provided to the players at the start of a mission or is it simply a unit you can place in the map? Either way, there should be more about its usage in the page. Good work so far. Corellian PremierJedi symbolThe Force will be with you always 18:08, September 9, 2015 (UTC)
    • Thanks! I've updated it with gameplay info. Cwedin (talk) 19:35, September 9, 2015 (UTC)
  3. *Okay, I'm actually going to have to ask you to hunt down the source for the non-canon part, since you address it in the BTS. Corellian PremierJedi symbolThe Force will be with you always 22:05, September 18, 2015 (UTC)
Ayrehead
  • Could you mention more clearly in the BTS that while its appearance in the game is considered canon the events of the missions it is seen in aren't and so neither are its presence at Endor or Hoth. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:59, September 12, 2015 (UTC)
    • While that agrees with Wookieepedia's consensus on game mechanics, I can't find an official source to use as a reference. I've added a bit on the matter. Cwedin (talk) 02:15, September 13, 2015 (UTC)
      • You could probably just say that since it clearly doesn't match up to what happens in the films it can be assumed to be non-canon. I seem to remember there was also a tweet or something from one of the developers about it being canon characters and vehicles in non-canon situations or something? I don't think it's necessary for you to search that down though. Ayrehead02 (talk) 15:11, September 13, 2015 (UTC)
        • Done. Cwedin (talk) 15:57, September 15, 2015 (UTC)
Exiled Jedi
  • The appearance of the vehicle could easily be described further.--Exiled Jedi (talk) 02:30, October 24, 2015 (UTC)
  • Is there any indication from the game what kind of turret is on the back of the vehicle?
  • Are those engines on the rear of the vehicle?--Exiled Jedi (talk) 19:54, October 24, 2015 (UTC)
    • Probably, but the game doesn't say. Cwedin(talk) 20:04, October 24, 2015 (UTC)
  • All right, this article is at 242 words, which means that the main body of this article should be broken into multiple sections. You will need an introduction (for an article this size it should be about two sentences) giving an overview of the vehicle. Then you will need a description section, a history section, and the behind the scenes section. The behind the scenes section should be able to stay the way it is. Anything you mention in the introduction will need to be mentioned again in either the description or history sections. After you section the article, you will more than likely be over the 250 word limit for comprehensive articles. When you are ready, I can archive this nomination and you can take this nomination to the GAN page.--Exiled Jedi (talk) 02:34, October 25, 2015 (UTC)
    • Article is now sectioned. Cwedin(talk) 04:22, October 25, 2015 (UTC)

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