Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Tuntis

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Tuntis

• Nominated by: CometSmudge (talk) 01:38, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• Date Archived: 04:22, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
• Final word count: 206 words (0 introduction, 164 body, 42 behind the scenes)
• Word count at nomination time: 196 words (0 introduction, 154 body, 42 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:THR WP:Novels

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Support

1. Lewisr (talk) 03:23, 18 May 2024 (UTC)
2. Panther436 (talk) 01:34, 23 May 2024 (UTC)
3. —spookywilloww^talk 04:21, 27 May 2024 (UTC)

Object

ThrawnChiss

• The date in the infobox and "around that year" are both referenced to the story, not the date note. ThrawnChiss7 ^{Assembly Cupola} 12:44, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
  • I fixed it CometSmudge (talk) 20:15, 17 May 2024 (UTC)

Lew

• You'll need to combine the reference in the death field so that the date and location are mentioned in the same reference, see Venn's commander for example Lewisr (talk) 00:20, 18 May 2024 (UTC)
  • I changed it CometSmudge (talk) 01:24, 18 May 2024 (UTC)

spookly

• The mention of Tuntiss's home in the page's quote is enough to make a page for that.
• If Kaxx was his close friend as seems to be indicated, that should be introduced before the info about his death in the interest of them forming that bond chronologically prior to the fatal incident.—spookywilloww^talk 06:08, 23 May 2024 (UTC)
  • I addressed both and also added that his home was destroyed, since that also seems relevant. Should the salmaca's cave also get a page? CometSmudge (talk) 18:12, 24 May 2024 (UTC)
    • Yeah; has a decent enough plot role that it needs a page.—spookywilloww^talk 04:11, 25 May 2024 (UTC)
• Worth noting that this (per the wordcounter.net counter anyway, since that's a touch more accurate than the in-server one) says this is 165 words. It could really go either way if you either find one word to nick out, or go the sectioning route to work in the story's mention of Jerlyn's distress when discussing Tuntis' death, and/or tucking "for his friend" onto the end of "to take revenge on the salmaca." Kinda more of a preference thing, but technically 165 at the moment.—spookywilloww^talk 04:11, 25 May 2024 (UTC)
  • I slightly reworded the first sentence so it should be at 164 now. Also added the link for the salmaca cave. CometSmudge (talk)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 04:21, 27 May 2024 (UTC)