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Tong
- Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast (Hello there) 00:18, 8 June 2021 (UTC)
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Fan26 (Talk) 15:00, 9 June 2021 (UTC)- OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 20:30, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
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Commander Code-8 Hello There! 10:59, 13 June 2021 (UTC)
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CC-8
Second sentence needs to be reworded and possibly broken up, "and in an attempt" doesn't read right coming after a clause that starts with "when."Commander Code-8 Hello There! 10:25, 13 June 2021 (UTC)- This look better? Braha'tok enthusiast (Hello there) 10:57, 13 June 2021 (UTC)
- Yarp. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 10:59, 13 June 2021 (UTC)
- This look better? Braha'tok enthusiast (Hello there) 10:57, 13 June 2021 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 06:32, 15 June 2021 (UTC)