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The Maestro
- Nominated by: AmazinglyCool
(talk) 21:13, 26 February 2023 (UTC) - Nomination comments:
- Date Archived: 19:22, 18 March 2023 (UTC)
- Final word count: 205 words (0 introduction, 52 body, 153 behind the scenes)
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Commander Code-8 Hello There! 07:10, 16 March 2023 (UTC)- Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:27, 18 March 2023 (UTC)
—spookywillowwtalk 19:21, 18 March 2023 (UTC)
Object
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The Maestro has weapons that can be described- As the weapons of Haxion Brood Bounty Droids are all the same, and built-in, wouldn't this information better go on the page for the droid type.
- It still needs a broad description at least and the armament section of the infobox should be filled in
- Addressed.
- It still needs a broad description at least and the armament section of the infobox should be filled in
- As the weapons of Haxion Brood Bounty Droids are all the same, and built-in, wouldn't this information better go on the page for the droid type.
I don't remember how the encounter went for me but a quick Youtube check shows that The Maestro can be the one who captures Cal and takes him to the fighting pitCommander Code-8 Hello There! 10:09, 9 March 2023 (UTC)- As far as I can tell, any of the Haxion Brood bounty hunters can be the hunter that captures Cal and then fights him in the arena. As such, I think the body for these articles needs to be vague about how they encounter and are defeated by Cal, with the two possible scenarios briefly mentioned in the BTS. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:37, 9 March 2023 (UTC)
- Addressed, although I may have gone into a little too much detail. AmazinglyCool (talk) 20:44, 9 March 2023 (UTC)
- That's actually all good, the part where it says "the player may be attacked and captured by The Maestro" it should have a little bit more saying that they can be attacked by any of the Haxion bounty hunters, including The Maestro Commander Code-8 Hello There! 04:35, 13 March 2023 (UTC)
- Added.
- That's actually all good, the part where it says "the player may be attacked and captured by The Maestro" it should have a little bit more saying that they can be attacked by any of the Haxion bounty hunters, including The Maestro Commander Code-8 Hello There! 04:35, 13 March 2023 (UTC)
- Addressed, although I may have gone into a little too much detail. AmazinglyCool
- As far as I can tell, any of the Haxion Brood bounty hunters can be the hunter that captures Cal and then fights him in the arena. As such, I think the body for these articles needs to be vague about how they encounter and are defeated by Cal, with the two possible scenarios briefly mentioned in the BTS. Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:37, 9 March 2023 (UTC)
There's quotes that can be usedCommander Code-8 Hello There! 04:35, 13 March 2023 (UTC)- Added quote. 23:09, 13 March 2023 (UTC)
Ayrehead
Are you assuming masculine programming just based on the voice? If so then that should be removed.Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:37, 16 March 2023 (UTC)- Removed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 12:44, 18 March 2023 (UTC)
- Removed. AmazinglyCool
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 19:21, 18 March 2023 (UTC)