Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Thaneespi

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Thaneespi

• Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:17, 10 June 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Thaneespi!

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. VergenceScatter (talk) 22:52, 10 June 2021 (UTC)
2. Fan26 (Talk) 21:28, 12 June 2021 (UTC)
3. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 19:28, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
4. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 12:02, 15 June 2021 (UTC)
5. Lewisr (talk) 23:51, 15 June 2021 (UTC)

Object

Vergence

• I'd combine the last two sentences of the first paragraph. VergenceScatter (talk) 21:52, 10 June 2021 (UTC)
  • Sure, done. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 21:55, 10 June 2021 (UTC)

OOM

• First officer can't be sourced to ROTJ. Also, to clarify, does the source actually say that the Mon Cal was the first officer?
• Date ref: as with many other recent noms, "including the appearance of" should be replaced by "which includes the appearance of" when the BBY/ABY date source (i.e. Galactic Atlas in this instance) does not actually date the article subject's appearance, and instead only dates the events of the source in which the subject appears (i.e. ROTJ in this instance) OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 20:32, 17 June 2021 (UTC)
  • All should be done. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 21:30, 17 June 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• Article has been updated. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 00:14, 16 June 2021 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 09:37, 18 June 2021 (UTC)