Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Tarnack

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Tarnack

• Nominated by: ThrawnChiss7 ^{Assembly Cupola} 22:53, 1 December 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: There isn't a lot of precedent for this type of article, but I think the article accurately describes all relevant information.
• Date Archived: 18:55, 12 December 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 67 words (0 introduction, 16 body, 51 behind the scenes)
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Support

1. Lewisr (talk) 16:33, 12 December 2023 (UTC)
2. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 18:30, 12 December 2023 (UTC)
3. —spookywilloww^talk 18:55, 12 December 2023 (UTC)

Object

Lew

• The BTS should mention the Making of book Lewisr (talk) 05:41, 5 December 2023 (UTC)
• I think a little context for George Lucas could be added, like Star Wars creator or something Lewisr (talk) 05:41, 5 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Both added. ThrawnChiss7 ^{Assembly Cupola} 13:02, 5 December 2023 (UTC)
• Is Han Dardell Thorpe accurate in saying that Han was the head pilot? If so then I think that should also be mentioned here Lewisr (talk) 00:59, 12 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Yes, added. ThrawnChiss7 ^{Assembly Cupola} 13:22, 12 December 2023 (UTC)

Anil

• Have you checked other sources listed on Journal of the Whills, Part I for possible mentions? Star Wars Year By Year: A Visual History, New Edition and its previous editions, for example, have an image of the handwritten first page of the draft, which mentions Tarnack. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 20:47, 6 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Yes it does, and the image does include the the part in the draft that mentions the Tarnack. I'm not sure we should include that as a mention on the page because it is only a image of a handwritten cursive draft, and the prose of the books do not actually mention the ship. ThrawnChiss7 ^{Assembly Cupola} 22:03, 6 December 2023 (UTC)
    • I get that, but I'd say it's similar to subjects that appear in preview pages included in StarWars.com articles, which are still listed in the relevant pages' Sources section despite not being mentioned in prose. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 22:33, 6 December 2023 (UTC)
      • The Year By Years have been added. ThrawnChiss7 ^{Assembly Cupola} 19:22, 11 December 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 18:55, 12 December 2023 (UTC)