Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Talbot

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Talbot

• Nominated by: Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 20:28, August 3, 2011 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:I've wanted to do this for a long time.

(2 ECs/1 Users/3 Total)

Support

1. Looks good.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 02:29, August 4, 2011 (UTC)
2. ~Savage 16:36, August 7, 2011 (UTC)
3. Then shall our names, familiar in the mouth as household words—Hairy the King, Bedford and Exeter, Warwick and Talbot, Salisbury and Gloucester—be in their flowing cups freshly rememb'red. NaruHina ^Talk 22:31, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
4. Menkooroo 15:02, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Object

1. 'Bob'
   • Can you add just a tad of context about why the commandos sent the distress call?
     • Done. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 19:39, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
   • How long was it between his responding to the distress call and the attack on the Prosecutor? ~Savage 14:09, August 5, 2011 (UTC)
     • Fixed. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 21:23, August 6, 2011 (UTC)
       • Sorry, now I'm confused. There are so many ships mentioned that it's hard to keep track of where the clones are, where they encountered droids, etc. Can you revert to the older version but simply add some notion of how long it is between distress signal and Talbot's helping the group fight the bad guys? ~Savage 21:59, August 6, 2011 (UTC)
         • Well, since it's a video game it can vary, and I don't totally understand what you mean. But, try something like this. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 00:32, August 7, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

1. Commenting because I dunno if I'll be back for a while, but you should probably explicitly mention that Talbot did get Delta Squad off the Prosecutor. NaruHina ^Talk 22:31, August 8, 2011 (UTC)
   • Done, thanks Naru. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 02:13, August 9, 2011 (UTC)