Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Tal (Nurse)

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Tal (nurse)

• Nominated by: Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 21:14, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:Partner nom to my other CAnom.

(2 ECs/2 Users/4 Total)

Support

1. --Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 22:14, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
2. NaruHina ^Talk 18:28, July 9, 2011 (UTC)
3. ~Savage 13:30, July 16, 2011 (UTC)
4. Menkooroo 03:36, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Object

1. Rubedo
   • Saying "...Darth Malgus from taking Malgus's lover..." sounds wierd. Could you establish that Daru was at the medical facility where Tal worked, then say Malgus came for her? NaruHina ^Talk 21:26, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
     • Fixed.Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 22:12, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
   • Why are you using Sith Master there? That is a title specific to the master/apprentice relationship, and Malgus was not in one of those to my knowledge. He was a Sith Lord. NaruHina ^Talk 22:23, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
     • Done.
   • The nurse "warned him that Malgus was a Sith" so what happened? NaruHina ^Talk 22:23, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
     • done.
   • I think it would be better to say that the facility was alligned with the Galactic Republic rather than stating flatly that Tal was GA-affiliated. That them medical facility is on Coruscant is is why Tal is GR-affiliated, I presume? NaruHina ^Talk 22:23, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
     • and done. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 22:40, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
   • Was the reason he let Malgus leave with her becasue the Sith were in power on the planet or merely the intimidation factor? That's probably not specified, but I just wanna check. NaruHina ^Talk 23:17, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
     • Deceived simply states that he let her go. It doesn't state why. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 01:00, July 7, 2011 (UTC)
2. Exiled Jedi
   • You need to mention his affiliation to the Republic in the body of the aritcle.--Exiled Jedi (Greetings) 21:54, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
     • Got it. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 22:12, July 6, 2011 (UTC)
3. Bob
   • The infobox claims he was aligned with the Republic, but can we really say that? I'd wager that lots of common folk on Coruscant have no real government-oriented alignments at all and are just content to do their jobs. ~Savage 16:30, July 15, 2011 (UTC)
     • Yea, I think you're right. Especially considering what is said here. Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 20:32, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

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